(HOOK) IF YOU WERE ME AND I WAS YOU PEOPLE WOULD SAY YOUR ILL AS FUCK...BUT WE NOT SO AS LONG AS IM ME YOUR JUST GONNA SUCK.....
IT AINT AVARINCE ITS AROGANCE.
MY MOMS MUST TOOK DOGYSTYLED A HELL OF A DICK0
LOOK AT ME NOW IM A COCKY SON OF BITCH.

Think you can eat me? ill snatch the food OUT your mouth-
You might as well rap south.
your micCHECK’s only expected to bounce.
Im a higher form of intelligents to these irelevent degenerets-
Im as generous as the IRS fucking your money with malevolence-
and screw your chances for benefits.
I settle beaf with bank rates and lay away scams-
Loan you the mic then make you “pay for it” after its back in my hands.
So what will it take for you to understand?
im not your typical m.c. with metaphors-
I hate fans….my song are floor plans to design bombs for cold wars.
You aint got the comprehension for the lines I mention-
My intention is to summer school m.c.’s… then son them in detention.
Calculaten the methods you fakes be haten-
Cause im ill and you couldn’t hold your own masterbaten.
This is me ..that is what I do… slaymen-in laymens-
defeat satan-in a mercy match where he taps screamin AMENS!!!!
Try to be me but you just aint that type-
Plus you aint sick or ill….even your doctor say your cd aight-
I blaze heat for the street……
while for you “cocked dolo and grip tight”
Only describes your vibe on a lonely saturday night.
Don’t step on stage-and diss expecting for me to be amazed-
Yeah your rhymes is dimes but I work to hard for minimum wage.
Turn the page-
you started and ended as a has been-With no artistic ability …
Every thing you spit was identically related like the OLSON twins.
Infected with relative brain disability.
I got to many skillz… the last time I spit 16 was when I was 13-
What does that mean?
if you don’t understand then your just wack-spin wax –
and only listen to 8tracks-cause your brain perception goes way back.
Im iller than you and anyone you can get for the duet-
Im the KAMA SUTRA of rap I show you lame fucks how to do IT.

(HOOK) IF YOU WERE ME AND I WAS YOU PEOPLE WOULD SAY YOUR ILL AS FUCK...BUT WE NOT SO AS LONG AS IM ME YOUR JUST GONNA SUCK.....
IT AINT AVARINCE ITS AROGANCE.
MY MOMS MUST TOOK DOGYSTYLED A HELL OF A DICK0
LOOK AT ME NOW IM A COCKY SON OF BITCH.


its obvious you aint real this kid is sworming with fubouge-
don’t want get called out next time try Performing in camoflouge.
Face it you aint ready for war so you don’t want more-
If you want to get beat for a fee try a domonatrex or whore.
And I haten but im waken and baken these narcoleptics-
With pyro technics-you wouldn’t at my level if we measured by metric.
Your not a famous artist, you only known to draw blanks-
Im so ill my napster files dowload viruses to memory bank.s
So Let’s be frank-the only way that shitty flow will ever get RANK-
is if you start confessing you drank out of a ceptic tank.
See when I start rapping- you’ll even hear your fans clapping-
In a battle you wouldn’t TOUCH me in wrestling or GRAPPLING.
What else do I have to do to prove if you did it I’ve done it-
You’re a biter… I bet you’d see my writ script if you vomit.
Im the grim reap to cats who want beaf peep on beat-
How I break the track laws with no clause just cause no cat can compete-
By the time im done attacking everyone on this peace-
police will have to file my song as a felony on my rap sheets-
I’ll catch a gun charge for my lungs and tongue spitting the heat.
You’d get banned from sperm banks for cuming weak.
Satan himself- told me to go to hell.You got no heart-
only spitten flatlines you cant rhyme ill rip you apart before we start-
Kill you in a sentence And puncture you with a punctuation mark.
The only way you’ll see me on your tracks is to show the affliction-
of an addiction-from a mic fiend who couldn’t BUST with FRICTION
im realer than you that’s fact …
and if you read this file it under non fiction.definition of crack.

(HOOK) IF YOU WERE ME AND I WAS YOU PEOPLE WOULD SAY YOUR ILL AS FUCK...BUT WE NOT SO AS LONG AS IM ME YOUR JUST GONNA SUCK.....
IT AINT AVARINCE ITS AROGANCE.
MY MOMS MUST TOOK DOGYSTYLED A HELL OF A DICK0
LOOK AT ME NOW IM A COCKY SON OF BITCH.

this was hot...as usual...evrything but the multi'z were on point...but I did notice a semi-multi in the 1st coupla linez...and the flow kinda makez up for lack of multi'z...but still...a good multi doez wonderz for the flow...instead of just rhymin' the last word of every line...try rhyming the last 2 or 3 wordz in every line...that is a multi...and once you master that...you can try to rhyme whole sentences...like I do on occasion......it's ok though twin...you still ALMOST as sexy as me...

I see that you added the 1st verse to ya rhyme...it's dope too...I can't decide which of the 2 versez is better...

thanks pop atleast someone read it

i liked it......pretty good actually...
the subject wasn't that good but u improved upon it i think...

all in all i gave this piece a 7.0/10......which is ok but not fantastic....

but u have intrigued me to veiw more of your pieces.......

I'd like ur opinion on
The Monkey Dream
thanks and keep postin.....pc*1*

where is it CARSON and what did you noy like aboute this?

Good piece. .Nice read. .Flow was on point & nice vocab. .

lol. .Thats how you reply

. .But. .Since your gangsta & tough(saw pic. .lol)

I'll reply as usual & you will follow. .Lmao bruv

The vocab was good on this & it was all neccesary & only added to the complexity of the piece & when you was onna bout your intelligence the vocab there was very complex & linked nicely with the lines. .Multis were lacking but the inners made up for it I suppose. .B'cos the flow was good. .The content was funny & the hook was also funny. .Well constructed song. .Would like to her it on audio. .Pz

Don't forget. .Reply in DETAIL on mine. .

didn't feel the hook but the rest was hotter than hell!
like kingz said:as usual...
9/10

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Hot shit daddy...you're definitely on top of your game. The wordplay is crazy and the flow is nice. Stay active fam. One+

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thank you i appreciate the words that means alot

damn good drop man, both verses were good, your flow was easy to follow, but like king of theives said it lacked multies...but your wordplay and punches made up for that...good drop man...9/10

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Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
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ONCE AGAIN ILL DROP A LOT OF PPL DONT PUT MUCH EFFORT INTO THE HOOK BUT URS WAS ILL IT WAS STRAIGHT UP AND EASY TO FOLLOW U NEVER DISSAPOINT

thank you omen repping