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I Wish For Just One Minute I Could Feel Blessed
Love From My Surroundings Or A State Of Respect

Extended days resulting into floods of rain from my being
prevailing into the shadows inside a cage trapped with demons
Lonely but im not alone Attention just isnt my friend
seems tobe my enemy the devil who is defining my end
Attempting to stay before my youth but i must orbit
open the gates to heavon taking my life lendin you a prophit
Fairy tale lives people livin is driving me crazily insane
tramendous amount of blood leak out my veins from these games
Battle scares on my arm from the wisdom thoughts of death
focused on hell because i wasnt blessed i die in my every rest
A state of conquest is that i shall recieve my last request
my morals are simple "try to hide" being a misty ghost is my quest
I'm not a rebelious character i am expierar to god in every aspect
yet I was chosen to go to sleep an die wake up hates suspect
Inflatued, fasinated by the existance of having no comical purpose
a dull star wit no passion of satisfaction just a scratched surface

Hook
I Wish For Just One Minute I Could Feel Blessed
Love From My Surroundings A state Of Respect

I wish on my loved ones lives we can all relax and communicate
suppose that will never reveal becuz hate happens to excelerate
Combustchien over omunity regquently speaking of theropy
To help see beyond the stars apt to the lords prayer of my destiny
Michael: Like Unto The Lord My Exodus 15:2is my only companien
*The Lord Is My Strength And My Song He Has Become My Salvation, He Is My God I Will Exalt Him*
God def to my prayers blind to my tears influencing my lust to end
uncontrollable erges for I set free from my deep cannan
Let me explode never reload let my eyes open an start expanding
Or am I in'a dream, a coma, unable to exscape into reality
failure my only sucess i wasnt blessed barely reached satisfactory
I suppose my rain is bronze tint from the clouds of heavonly doubt
trapped in'a life of regrets brokem promises somebody lemme out
This is my wish that a heavonly angel will come calm me, help me vanish

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

Combustchien over omunity FREQUENTLY speaking of theropy---thats wut it is suppose to reap i apoligize..peace

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

I quoted this coz I feel it's the most effective of the whole peice, I think you'd be better off not using couplets so often... Good read, good post, good thougt an creativity put into your work...

"Battle scares on my arm from the wisdom thoughts of death
focused on hell because i wasnt blessed i die in my every rest
A state of conquest is that i shall recieve my last request
my morals are simple "try to hide" being a misty ghost is my quest
I'm not a rebelious character i am expierar to god in every aspect
yet I was chosen to go to sleep an die wake up hates suspect"

PS Uppin 4 feed bk on my work too

'Is it me your looking for"

uppen for some feedback

__________________
Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461