very quick battle

due by 12 eastern time

12 lines

no d/r
no crew
no hate
no feedin
blind spit
we both spit at same time

check in be4 spittin

aight ima chekcin in now and spiiting

u should do the same

remember due by 12 eastern...thats 40 minutes

aight. im keying right now. if mines a lil late, im sry. i was spitting my verse on me and rapper_bigga. but im keyin

This is the french revolution, ur marie antionette i'm the guillotine/
Choppin heads off lacerations more grizzly than that memphis team/
Are u ready man? your face to face wit ammuntion/
As I'm slammin A minor.. like an angered musician/
Your elevating? Going through the sediments of the evident/
Your style's like camera film you need to take time to develop it/
Your not ill, so you act dope like the Rock's stunt double's trouble with immigration/
If I came 1st or 2nd, you'd still get fucked either way like double penetration/
Ill plan ur demise blueprint 4 terror,...if u wanna harm me try it/
But fuckin wit me u destined 2 die like japanese kamikaze pilots/
Bad choice battling me...whos gonna get the votes??...take a guess/
You think ur so smart but ur battling me...u cant even spell fresh/

Watch presh 'Stop Kill' like *Homicide Detectives*!! my hard punches threaten-his-hits /
why do you try? its known im quick to really "Kill Joy" like a |Family Death On Christmas|!! //
just give up now chump, my shots will leave this bitch "Burned Bad" till yah *Fear-Heaters*!!
yah over, its obvious yah already "Used Up Yah Chants"(chance) like |Washed Up Cheerleaders|!! //
Yah 'Lieing', if you "Hold Weight" then simply, the *Truths-Weak*!! assault till this dudes-beat /
Phresh'll have yah resorting to |Backflips Over Baby Trees| to try an |Turn Over A New Leaf|!! //
...My punches were "Made For Kill" like *Concentration Camps*!! yah thoughts-are-ending /
when perfected hits leave Kill Joy "Coming To Tears" like fathers at their |Daughters Wedding|!! //
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not seeing-me-scum, trust fate and believe-me-yah-done |
fuck ill even waste this last line......(cause i easily won) ||

ehh... this was kind of a shitty verse. but lets see the voters vote, well when ur done.

aight. uppin for some votes in here. uppin #1................................................ ..............

pretty good battle. gazeebo's flow was definitely better, but he also had better punches and better wordplay. phresh had some wordplay, but it didnt work as well.

vote: gazeebo

oh...right...i spend time on your battle, spend time on mine.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943

thats a fucking dick riding vote and i know it. better wordplay my ass. half of the shit he said didnt even fucking rhyme.

Vote-Gazeebo
punches-tie
complexity-presh
enjoyment-both
flow-none
metas-gaz
sustainment-gaz
overall-Gazeebo
jus hit harder and good metas
helped his cause....................

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS PLZ PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236

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sustainment? what the fuck does that have to do with battling? i dont even know what the hell it means. the wierd thing is and i just noticed that. take a look at doc_knock and GaZeeBo's IP's. exactly the same. hmm... suspicious

i have the same IP as him? um...thats strange. im not the same person tho, honestly.

and its not a hate vote or anything, just honest, dont get mad at honest votes.

yo sry for freepost but bullshit

i wanna see where our ip is the same

just take the votes as they come

if the guy is 19-3...maybe he knows just a little bit about battling

yea and how did we just post 1 minute apart from each other.

theres gotta be 30 seconds in between

plus i still wanna see where it says that we have the same ip

if we do than something is fucked up

oh. i made a mistake. i was looking at doc_knock's post above his. my bad. just keep the votes coming. im sorry.