aight kid i set it up now u spit it...

this should be easy....this kid pathetically lost his first battle
im simply dissin a gay kid who gets more cowboy ass than a saddle/
grafh, jayz wana-be, but this kid is too nerdy
your probly see alot of g's get spanked up in new jersey/
how gay can he be, this kid probably hates ho's
he came closer to ultimate homo in all 38 posts/
how can you be from nj, your a disgrace to the far east
ill be flyin up the rankings...youll always be "new to the RB"/
face it...your not welcome here cuz everyone hates you
your own record says it, i read that you lost on your debut

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A YO KID U SHOULD HAVE NEVA CAME AT ME WIT THAT WACK ASS RAP//
YEA SO WUT IM FROM NEW JERSEY BUT COME ROUND HERE I BET U WILL HEAR THEM GUNZ CLAP//
BEFORE U GOT IN THIS BATTLE U SHOULD HAVE THOUGHT//
I CANT BEAT THIS KID GRAFH NOT EVEN WIT A RAP I BOUGHT//
U LIVE IN BOSTON SON COME ON NOW WHERE IS THAT?//
A PLACE WHERE WHITE PEOPLE LIVE AND NEVA HEARD OF NIGGAS GIVIN DAP//
SO COME AROUND MY HOOD AND ILL SHOW U WUT ITS ABOUT//
WE GET THA BEST WEED ROUND HERE KID EVEN ON A DROUGHT//
THATS HOW IM LEAVIN IT JUST LIKE THAT//
U WANT 2 COME TEST ME OR YOUNG_A U BETTA BRING A ARMY WIT U FUCK A MACK// !BLAP! HOLLA BACK ~1~

this kids so stupid he forgot how to rap…what a bitch
YO TYPE LIKE THIS CUZ U FORGOT WER DA CAPS BUTON IS
…lol yup
this is my up

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opener:tie
closer:junio
wordplay:tie
flow:junio
structure:junio
punches:junio
overall:junio


both yall need t elevatate

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aite cool...but how did his opener even come close to mine
i mean ill admit i had no wordplay but check out our openers again

this is being voted on slow. second up

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yea so can someone break it down for us? or just vote whatever...... and hit this thread up with ur threads ill take a look

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yo will someone fucking vote for once..........................................
.................................................. ...........................DAMN

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i cant vote on the poll but if i cus, sixnine wud get my vote

CHECK OUT MY BATTLE AGAINST ARCHER

yo im sayin ...please VOTE ON THIS SHIT
when i get 100 posts ima vote for all yall...but for now can u just vote on this shit now...thankyou

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Give'n This To Junio sixnine. Came Harder In His Verse. Hard Punches And Better Wordplay Were His Key To Win'n This Battle. Grafh Need 2 Elevate Serious.

Flow - junio sixnine
Multies - neither
Opener - junio sixnine
Finisher - junio sixnine
Structure - junio sixnine
Wordplay - neither
Metaphores - neither
Punch Lines - junio sixnine
Rhyme Scheme - tie

Overall - junio sixnine; 5-0

junio - you've reached ur 5 ups..that is all that is allowed (read rules) go over, you will lose.

vote = junio...
both were boring...
junios less so, rhymed better, used better structure.
yall both need mad elevation....
work on it. pz