Aight,

THis one is for the Spit Vicious crew collab and I jus killed it. Intro is a bit long and I need to tone down sum of the scratchin but when it hitz 40 secondz and kicks ur ass i don't think i'm gonna hear to many complaints.

Lookin for some real feedback on this one.

Only the Best Spit Vicious.

n i respond with real feedback to any who take the time to do the same. peace.

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it starts off coo.. but in the intro it sounds like one not is held longer.. LOL you must have been on speed when you were making the intro... at 40 the shit all comes together... beat is tight... but i suggest you turn the bass up a lil.... well maybe a lot more. that pizzato is kinda tacky... you have a few changes...... overall nice mayne. LOL at scratches.. they are not really on beat. not my style of beats... but i think the finished product will be smashin.. that melody is coo.

damn shits pretty tight dawg --- it started off soundin like a weird outkast beat or sumthin but at 40 seconds that shit blew up real nice --- the only thing i can suggest is changing the piano when it comes in , it doesnt sound heavy enough but other than that the beat wuz fire --- one

thanks both of ya...much appreciated

yeah, i might tone down the intro a bit. Little too much speed that night....

Already took out a lot of the scratchin...too much crack maybe

A harder paino would prolly be better i agree...with the right amount of coke i might be able to write that

I'll be fixin it up a lot before the collab audio gets uploaded.

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naw dawg the intro is fine just cut it down to like half that cause its a nice opener

word i peeped this before.. it was iight.. the sample was pretty coo, kinda catchy.. drumline was iight, but way too soft.. snare and kicks and hi hats could barely be heard, and bass could be a bit rockin better.. piece 1 stay up

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its a well laced beat... but iam not feelin' it...