you got 30 min to spit

10-15 bars if you need


holla back to fuckin hate vote or crew votes


g/l

Jack-N-Banks thinks he (Grab-N-Ranks) //
Says he bust shots when he's really (Pack-N-Blanks)

for real ----looK as at you sig its MAN ----- its like penis----
its (Wack)/
i mean spell it out dawg----- (I MEAN IT ) (JESUS) you a (FAG)/
ya (ASS) is like a hotels on (SAD) its always (PACKED)<<<(saturday)
This aint a real man---- its a women --------------IN (DRAG)

this (CAT) thinkn he gone beat me cuz i'm (o-N-6)
if he (HAS) children i'm gunna (Own-His-Kids)--
with thoughts of (Hope-Less-Ness) after i (Explode-His-Ribs)
cuz this battle is (O-Ver-with)
ripp out his BRAIN and leave a message of PAIN
so he (Wont-Forget)

Blah, 10 Lines, Fuck Structure......


Man I Told This Kid He Was Whack, But All He Did Was Ignore Me
Why Should I Bother To Write About His Whackness, When His
..........Verses Do IT 4 Me!
Man We Know This Kid's A Homo, And He Like To Live His Life In Switch.
This Cat's The Reason Why People Say.....Life's A Bitch!
With Out A Hitch, I'll Kid This Cat Off The Ledge...
I'll Stab Him Wit A Sword S That He Cam Say He's Lived Life on The Edge!
1's Like a kid Wit No Legs Cuz He'll Never Be Able To Jump Over The Hurdle.
I'll Hit This Cat Wit Hard Shells Like Fightin Teenage Mutant Turtles!
Man This Kid Should Be A Commedian His Verse Was So Whack
.................That It's Funny.
I'm Killin You Dunny, If I Gave Him A Penny For Thought He Would
..................Owe Me Money!

damn weak battle but 1 liner won it cuz of his lunches and personals...............

vote 1liner

peace

aight thanx to bad it dont count but holla back at cha boi
lol

nice verse JAck
hit me on aim if ya want
kreep101

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Drop A Link And We'll Hit Ya Shit Up.....
pZ.

and u gonna hate vote eh nigga............................................. ....

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peace

vote dawg please dont clog the thread man

holla back and poll vote if ya want

pz................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

Vote: 1liner

better multies, awful structure, other kid had better similes, but i enjoyed 1liners more so.

1lier no beef bout the other battle, just hit this one up honestly and wee coo, peace iT

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92061


Close battle

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stop cloggin dog
.................................................. ..........................vote or be gone .................................................. ...............................

1liner had good multies, and more creative.
other guys verse didnt hit as hard, and had some played lines.
but it was kinda weak, but 1 liner gets muh vote.

Vote honestly>
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

dog do me a fav and poll vote so we can clse this soo
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thanx for the luv holla ..................................

1liner took this... come harder

HIT THIS UP

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91823