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Old 10-28-03, 03:02 AM   #1
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I see kids playin' ball in the streetz...dog shit from the sidewalk all on ya feet...
I see gangsta'z on the block walkin' with heat...dressed up all in fatiguez...
I see a drug dealer sellin' weed to little boys while they mommy'z is wit' em...
elementary school kidz rollin' up blunts only so they mommy'z can hit em...
I love robbin'...I seen a group of thugz rockin' some little whiteboy'z love locket...
I seen drug poppin' motherz fightin' they sons over the drug profit...
the subway station'z right down the street but still some cats are runnin' on feet...
back to the block where gats is cocked and we ain't scared to pull a gun on police...
the street corner cypher'z where we can get to sonnin' a man...
around here niggaz walk down the street wit' a fuckin' blunt in they hand...
I seen my homeboy'z house where we go to relax as we joke...
an empty box of Newports in my hand as I'm ashin' the smoke...
laughter as a crackhead steps up to my ass askin' for coke....
I'm like fuck outta here man...I know ya ass is dead broke...
I see 2 niggaz talkin' shit as I take a glimpse at the loaded gun on my couch...
the 2 niggaz crewz started firin' at each other...EVERYBODY RUN IN YA HOUSE!!!!!!

^^^another late night early mornin' keystyle...

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Old 10-28-03, 04:45 AM   #2
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uppin'...
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Old 10-28-03, 05:45 AM   #3
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LOL SOMEBODY WATCHED menace AND boyz in the hood LAST NIGHT......LOL......I SAW SO MUCH OF THIS WHEN I LIVED ON 34 SARATOGA....

A GREAT PIECE FOR BEING SO SHORT BUT A GREAT READ YOU NOT FALLEN OFF AT ALL BUT I THINK I'VE ELIVATED ABOVE YOU...........LOL

LUKE I AM YOUR FATHER AND N-DEMIK IS YOUR MOTHER.....
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Old 10-28-03, 05:53 AM   #4
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I ain't seen Menace in like a year and I ain't seen Boyz in The Hood in like 10 yearz...lol...I was just lookin' outside this afternoon before I drove to my niggaz house...and I was listening to that song "Block Episode" by Masta Ace, Wordsworth, and Punchline...and I thought I would write a verse about a shootout on my block...
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Old 10-28-03, 12:53 PM   #5
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i thought this was a good topical, thought you set it down well, and got the meaning across good, some nice imagery, feelin it dawg....peace!...................
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Old 10-30-03, 02:07 AM   #6
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^^^thanks Deva...much love...
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Old 10-30-03, 03:43 AM   #7
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LOL SOMEBODY WATCHED menace AND boyz in the hood LAST NIGHT......LOL......I SAW SO MUCH OF THIS WHEN I LIVED ON 34 SARATOGA....

A GREAT PIECE FOR BEING SO SHORT BUT A GREAT READ YOU NOT FALLEN OFF AT ALL BUT I THINK I'VE ELIVATED ABOVE YOU...........LOL

LUKE I AM YOUR FATHER AND N-DEMIK IS YOUR MOTHER.....


ooohhh...I'ma tell Dirty Sally you cheatin' on her......and I thought N-Demik was a guy...but if not...doez she look good?????? cause she can be my "baby" mother......and if you my father then that would make you Feeblez grandfather...lol...hahaha...gramps...
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Old 10-31-03, 01:29 PM   #8
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anywayz...still uppin'...
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