If you look into my eyes
you'll see the love i have for you
this love is pure and wise
this love is completely true

if you look into my heart
you'll see just what you mean to me
without you I feel like feel like im falling apart
It's you who owns the key

If you look into my soul you'll find
that we are meant to be
you prove to me that love ain't blind
I'll love you for eternity

Put these things together
and hopefully you'll realize
that we are meant for each other
so open your beautiful blue eyes
It's me standing here before you
your very own best friend
i love everything you do
I'll love you until the end
We don't have to rush things
But your everything i need
this isnt just a little "fling"
your the flower to my weed
you make my smile
on the shittiest days
for you I'd walk a thousand miles
i love you in so many ways
I'll fulfil your every fantasy
and make your dreams come true
I'll do anything to make you see
that I was meant for you.

THIS WAS MAD SWEET
AWWW
I LOVED IT, BEAUTIFUL EMOTION
LIKE I SAY AS LONG AS ITS FROM THE HEART THE TECHNICAL ASPECTS DONT MATTER..SO IM NOT EVEN THINKING ABOUT IT
IT'S OBVIOUS YOUR FEELINGS ARE TRUE
NICE DROP
KEEP ELEVATIN

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."

WOW, I was totally feelin this! A lot of emotion, feeling, and love put into this. Yes, it is obvious that your feelings are true. Hang on to that love..

If u want the whole technical parts of it. Everything was perfect. The long section at the end seemed a little weird, but it all fit together so its iight.
Overall, GREAT AZZ DROP! I loved it. Keep droppin. Most respect.

GREAT piece. awesome structure. i can feel the love and emotion going through this piece like a constant heat flow. i was told by someone close to me "find someone u love and never let that person go". take my advise, follow your heart.

MM

This is a great peice. The emotion was well felt and everything was easy to read. The guy ur wirtin bout must be really special and I hope he relizes it. Great drop, keep writin JT

flow- was there, and the way you kinda separted in to two pieces, made it seem like with the second part it picked and there more truth and feelings came out

structure- was good, but sometimes i felt like some lines could be stretched out some more, of that the way the words were arranged did fit the piece, but it didnt take much away from the piece.

vocab- the one thing i can think to say about this is that you need to branch out when trying to compare what your feeling or whats going on to something everybody knows. in this piece you seem to fall into the rut of using the same comparisons that everybody has used, and is over used. put your flavor in it and make unique.

emotion- could feel that it was there, and that it was strong

message/topic- is one that is used often so remember you have to put something different in it some its not the same read as someone elses only rearranged. make us think about it all over again

~Tera~

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