16 lines max
all rules
blind spit

check in

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I didn't think you would do it....

Checkin the fuck in........................

I'll spit within the hour....before 4p on my clock

See ya den...

Acting like you stood a chance, please!~dont lemme hurt you
FIVE TO ONE?!!! Shiit I DID MORE THAN JUST MERKED YOU!!!
It dont even make sense for to go half nice
Shud feel ashamed to b the first to appear in my merked list twice!
I'm ruthless, punches all up in your grill like toothpicks
This second merking makes it clear why this herb's two to six
Reversing the shape o'ya chest when punches be concavin ya chest
Getting torn apart like Hurricanes hitting a Bird's nest
This man showed up, honestly "I didnt think you would do it"
Thought you'd be smarter than that for some1 who gets brains all day(check prof)
18 and still a virgin? Are you shy or a queer?!!
If I'm merking you twice dawg how could you leave me w/ nitemares?
I'll murder this herb no matter where he's from
Spray A's at his location to say I passed him n left him (M)issing (I)n Action

[Finisher]
I'm blazing this fraud, it's almost like you're facin a God
The way I "penciled" you into existence and erased you w/ no prob

dont feed

hahahaha *blagh* jes read over the verse
saw some mistakes like 2 lins didnt rhyme, wuteva tho, itz all gravy

waiting on u to drop

i like the finisher......very nice.............................................. .................................................. .............i'll be back when dude posts

Yo....yo...yo....check it....

Yo When I 'Hit', U 'Panik', I'm Like A 'Thorn' N Yer Stomach||*
Yer Lines Are 'Drunk', I cant 'Stand It' I just Get Mo 'Sicker' From-It||
Dont Be Bummin at 'Elevation', Watch My 'Ascention 'Round Heaven'||
Even With 'Biblical Lines' 'Preachers' Wouldn't Mention Da-Legend||
I Got This Phesant Guessin What I'm Usin For Lyrical Weopons||
My Words Kill Ya In Daylight But Still Leave Holes N Shapes Of Cresents||*
Keep 'Jackin After I Cum'...Da ONLY Way You'll 'Beat Me Twice'|| lol
I'll 'Work U In Minutes' And Then Yer 'Done Like E-Z Rice'||
I'll Seize Yer Life...Yer Help Right Now Is Like Night, Not In Sight||
Deleat That "3"...Yo Wins Might Take Off, But Not In Flight||
I Know You Anxious from Waitin For Da Heat I Be Spillin||
Ya Avatar Dude Know Im Sick...Thats Why He's Kneelin||

Holla at da kid...


*loses names
*moon shape

aight my 2 cents
Nightmares rhymes to me are to hard to follow and can't catch the flow
and its just doesn't go together
your lines cut off from onther

as far as Da Legend
his rhymes were more consistant and punches were aight
this was a losing battle for nightmare


Vote= Da legend

ps don't think i'm votin against you NM
just cuz of my battle
no beef just honest crituqe in my eyes

ok my vote goes to Da legend

flow=Da legend
lyrics= a bit more Da legend
punches=Da legend ( nitmare your texte was too short)
multies= well haha for sure there was missing some in both textes but it goes to Da legend

nice textes guys vote = Da legend

yo da legend got this wit a hot flow and nice punches

vote = da legend

yo come hit up my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90127

payyycee!!!

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Wins-
Gorillas Quantity (5-0), Young Hercules (5-0), MC Porno (5-0), MC High (5-0), My name is XL (5-0), Trevsgirl22 (5-0), Freeworld (5-0), Illest Killa (5-1)

Losses-
Envy NY (5-3), Solar Eclipse (5-1)

yea but both verses werent all that

but my vote goes to Green

Green, you forgot to poll yer vote on ma battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90307

da legend landed pretty good with his punches..nice flow...betta disses...his opener barz was nice

nitemare still usin cum lines...{wack} but his verse was iight..did'nt have enuff heat...punches were ok..disses were basic...elevate rookie

all i can say is da_legend came harder.... iwould usually quote and shit.. but no need

straight up

vote= Da_Legend

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*blagh* look at me....so silly, hit post in the wrong window.....

wuteva....im fucking high



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uppin number 2

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