10 to 15 lines you spit first

aight fuck waitin I gon' spit now

ya need to start blockin ya bout to get hit in tha face//
lace ya shoes up for walkin cause ya spits a disgrace//
your best chance for pussie's callen ellen degenerous//
good pussies gone to waste cause your a fallen degenerate//
this cats gettin hit more time than a million guard rails//
I'll rip open ya chest to watch ya spillin heart cells//
one cat feels ya and your head swells to twice as big//
but I'll cut it into size caus I'm gon' splice ya wig//
got this cat all twisted up just like a chain link fence//
then flush his head down the toilet cause his brain leaks shit//
I'll put you in the ground just like a stake for a tent//
by now he's called the cops to say he's been raped with a pen//
ashes to ashes and dust to dirt //
I'll end on that note and dont forget FUCK THIS HERB//

young you better not do any feeding either since you were supposed to go first............................................. .....................

my fault had to go get some pussy kid.....u know...


ight yo the only time this cats FLOW is like art/
is in school while colorin FLOW charts//

at first i thought what kinda name is V.A. SLIM/
then i was like-he talkin bout how him gettin Vigina & Ass is SLIM//(V.A. SLIM) ahaha

really im bigger than u-winnin this gives me no satisfaction/
i can tell wat grade u in cause ya rcord is subtraction (2-4)//

cat walked in blind-thinkin cause im a newb its a easy win/
then he found out im hot-burned holes in him wit my pen//

lyrics gonna have ya HEAD RINGIN-tryin to focus wit ya eyes swollen/
causin u pain like gettin a enima-while da DOC cleanse ya collen//

SLIM over hear cryin like a bitch-dont FEED off my verse/
shit worms gonna FEED off u-after ya short ride in a hurst/

ya flows is scatter brained like pentecostal atheists/
no rappin bastad-u at home listenin to AC DC-like lets spit to this/
dont get scared from da shit urine(your in)-even if i PISSED u off u couldnt win SHIT//

GOOD BATTLE....

uppin this shit 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111 1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111

flow=va
punches=yung
structure=va
creativity=yung
wordplay=va
overall=va

i think it was a close battle but VA edged it with a more consistent spit. and yung dun't rhyme the same word it looks dumb.

wack battle slim got this better vocabulary no personals springs had some but were wack and didn't make sense slim had better consistent with lines no multis no hard punches just i voted for the overall verse
slim

wack battle slim got this better vocabulary no personals springs had some but were wack and didn't make sense slim had better consistent with lines no multis no hard punches just i voted for the overall verse
slim

Vote for my battle with brixton click on link hollaz

aight yall uppin this shit for votes and if ya got a batttle going on leave a link and I'll hit it up wit an honest vote

slip took this i dissagreewith the other cat.......

his punches came through hardwer for me and allthough young's verse was a little moe complex....ii think slips punches won it for him....

could you hit this battle up plz only needs 1 more vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88927

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VA slims verse was a lot better, better flow and punches and he took this battle.....

errr..... I cant poll tho

Slim had a much better flow to his rhyme but young springs came with much deeper and complicated punches (well thought out). The punches and intricate format of young springs elevated him over slim in this battle. good battle wit 2 distinctly different styles.

Vote-young springs

i thought VA Slim had a better verse...young went soft on his...va punchs killed this nigga...Vote- Slim

HIT THIS LINK UP AND VOTE PLEASE!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=88962

slim took this battle wit harder punches better flow and more creativity........................................ ..my vote=slim