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Old 11-08-03, 09:18 AM   #1
Homicide187
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Struggle

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I struggle to succeed, n exceed, wat people read, in these magazines, about me/
they doubt me, without knoin wat rap would be like without be/
They say im too white for this black sound, hated because of my ethnic background, but my trax sound/
better then 90 percent of these artists, i work my hardest, but critics juss load a cartridge/
n take shots at me, kids throw rocks at me, because im not a black MC/
but after shots are fired, n the gats empty, im still standin, but no1 resents me/
Im just another MC, makin it in the industry, on a spittin spree/


ite.. juss sum short simple shyt... drop sum feed.. i had to drop at least one open mic.. so here it is..
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Old 11-08-03, 10:00 AM   #2
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YO HOMICIDE UR THE SHIAT DOG SO HOW ABOUT IT ME AND YOU START UP A GROUP ON THIS RAP BATTLE OK HERE IS THE DEAL IF U ACCEPT U CAN BE THE LEADER OF THAT SHIAT IF NOT THEN GOOD LUCK DOG AND GOOD SHIAT U JUST WROTE.
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Old 11-08-03, 10:42 AM   #3
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i thought there was a couple of ok multis in there, but it was way to short, your flow started good then fell off, but you picked it up again,, it would be better like i said if it was longer........not bad for a short verse...peace
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Old 11-08-03, 11:22 PM   #4
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Your flow fell off the cliff after the first few lines..way to short too..you gotta get better punches if you wanna make it that short..
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