Rules:
1.No crew votes
2.No hate votes
3.No d/r votes
4.8 bars
5.I drop first
you know the rest check in G/L

Checkin In Verse Will Be Up Tommrow Before 4 pm Eastern G2g But Checked In Already HollaZ and Gl In This Battle Son Your Gonna Need It ~1

*fingers touch keyboard*
Yo yo,
..This kids a vet?., Ideal Settings..|Lost Ya Touch| Like |Tight Pinky Rings|.. |[/b]Seal Ya Pores[/b]| And |Reverse The Sweating| .. Letting This Blade Graze Ya Face In A Range Of Ways..Deranged Tones, Dragon Crescendos In The Third Voice, Ya ‘Talks Be Slurred’ When I |Staple Ya Vocal Chords Against You| And |Hold You To Your Words| (damn)... Just Watch This |Herb Forfeit|., |Etch Crop Circles| Around His Carcass.. Bitch, I’ll |Stick The Metal| To Ya Chest Like |Magnets To A Fridge| .. Just Quit, I Build The Bridge To |Lift Ya Spirits| By |Murderin You In An Elevator| In A Matter Of Minutes.. Styles The Type To |Bag Ya Shit| Like |Diabetics Wit Poor Bowel Movements| I’m The God Of Text As I Riddle Yo Chest, You Battlin' the Best—Cuz i’ll Fold* Ya |Jaw To Ya Lungs| And Watch* This Chump |Talk Under His Breadth| (Sh1t!) ..Outlandish Spits, Ya Eye-Sceptics Approach Clearer, As My Punches Explode Nearer.. Yo, Here’s The Sealer—My |Texts Blow Inside Ya Ears| Like |Mind Readers| (damn)
..Puncture Wounds—Your A Bleeder Like Monthly Pussy..Who You Foolin’ C? Go Ahead And Sue Me, Cuz I |Exposes The Truth[b]| Like |[b]Centerfolds Of Judge Judy| .. Spew-A-Few-Frees, Kids Spook At The View Of This Seize.. Please Fag, Here’s The Plan: I’ll Flip lYou Upside Down| And |Make you My Next Fan| (oh shit, think about it)
..Attack This Man’s Clan With The Back Of My Hand.. See, I Choke You With Ya Icon’s Weave, i've Still Got Few More Tricks Up to set free..,Clock This Bitch Still isnt a vet.. Shit, Even your post saying, “ Ayo Luck your gonna need it ” !! (lol,check it out)
Please Bitch I'll Mess You Up kid , Straight to your chest, Whack Punches Metties And Multis—Your Tellin’ Me That’s A Vet?(ouch.. tko)
Sorry if I went over the timelimit I wasent on-or home
Sincerly yours,
Redragon

*Wack Herb Let Me Smoke Him*...........

Another Bout, Another Chump to get took off the globe....
Dog you lost the fight Before you fucking took off your Robe....
Your Lame ....No TV??........Cause Its no way we can see Your Game.....
In Fact the only way you can win is if I signed in wit your Screename......
I Grip hard, I could grab you by the head and Jerk out your spine....
Datin 4th Graders Is The Only Way U'll Dump Nines......42-5-33....And Still On FrontLines........
In this race you're too far behind.....
Couldn't Catch up(Ketchup) if you got a job with HEINZ......
Little man tried to fit in my pants, found out they was over sized....
My name should be RedDragon the way I Run Over Guys.....
Your Vote total is gonna be empty like theaters for Movies people never go to see.....
Cause I'm bout to beat your ass so bad EVEN you gonna vote for me....
You A Soft Easy To Rip Pussy Like One Of A Old Bitch.........
You Thought You Had This Win But Sorry Not With That Bold Shit........(Look At All His Verse)
I Leave Ya Dead With The Stainless.......Made Up Record Doggie....And You Still Not Famous......(Lol he 2-3 but has 45-5 on sig)
Dont Blame This ....I'm the Fire Extinguisher...N I Just Left Ya Flameless....

*OVER*

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Hit n panik got this one. I liked both drops but your structure fucked it up for me reddragon.
Vote Hit

good battle........

Flow-Hit...not all dat
Humor-Red
Metas-Red
Vocab-Red
Punches-Tied

RedDragon had hotter shit...I dont like his structure so I'd Fix it if u want me to vote again....Hit shoulda came a lot harder wit more Metas...

Yo hit this up, for YER honest vote...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90289

Thnx.....

i agree wit aragorn.. Red, ur structure fucked up ur shyt, juss tried to make it look more complex den it was... my vote is hit n panik

Ok Ok 1-1 uppin this and to explain my structure,I use the | but most newbies would use quotes so instead of using quotes I use |.Now stop voting against me cause of my structure,try and read the verses for what they're not for what they're suposed to look like,or how they're set up
1-1 uppin

panik got this cause he broughtmore complex rhymes to the table and his punches hit harder...............


U forgot to poll vote here PANIK
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=89770

Look past the way I form my verse...if you read the verse you'd see I got some good punches.1-1 uppin don't forget to poll vote.

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ok this is how i feal it
strucute:Hit dragon that was fuckin wack..i hat to move my screen just to read ur verse
flowragon
punchesragon easily..u just gotta understand them..n read pass the wackness of his structure..
werdplay:dragon

even though his shit was hard to read..it was nice..some good were play n punches..red won thisd battle

when ever u press : D togher...as the smile comes up sorry
i was just meaing to put DRAGON...k...just wanted to clear that up