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The Way It Should Be
IP: 07E0 A9F2
The way it should be is money making,
The way it should be is fine women dating The way it should be is free from hating Creating unity throughout all the nations……… A lot of hating goes on in the world around, Confounded countries bound by war cos of believed bounties, Think of the unnecessary deaths, stacking high, Dunno how many but at a guess no less than million, It needs addressed, try to imagine the pain that manifests Broken families, grieving, members untimely leaving What’s wrong is we all heathens? Medieval -feeling -can get what we want with fighting force and upheaval Bigger aint better all nations should be equal Continental unity collabing in life without the evil…… The way it should be is money making, The way it should be is fine women dating The way it should be is free from hating Creating unity throughout all the nations……… They say money cant buy you happiness But happiness can’t buy you money, funny How people with it come out with the coined phrases Spend ridiculous amounts in ridiculous places Growing up on the streets, you get to know different faces Learn to be streetwise - emphasise life, and be evasive Like the oil on a chain, keeping it running, money Smoothes the flow freeing time so there’s less confrontin In an ideal world be plenty green and gold, amounts obscene No hunger with disease eased, alas, its only a dream…… The way it should be is money making, The way it should be is fine women dating The way it should be is free from hating Creating unity throughout all the nations………x 2 |
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IP: 3BCE 57C7
it's hot, i liked it, good topic and good visuals
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IP: 19AF 50C1
AS I EXPECTED AN EXQUISIT READ GREAT POST ...
YOUR WAY OF WRITTING AND DERIVING MEANINGS AMPLIFIED BY WORD CONTENT IS NOTHING LESS THAN EXTRORDINARY |
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IP: 3CAA FAA2
your piece was well thought out and stuck to the same subject good lyricall dose but wasnt gully enough
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IP: C1DA C961
Yo this was good but just work on your word play and mutis
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IP: 63D7 39EF
This was a real good piece....it flowed nicely as i read it, didnt get off really at all....your vocab was good, nothing wrong there....structure was real good....your chorus was nice...i cant really say anything bad about this, cause i enjoyed reading it...it was a real good piece...keep at it...and keep dropping.
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IP: 4577 CD9A
this is tight shit nigga, flow was great, topic was good, the concept and message came through loud and clear.
overall like WORD~PERFECT SAID AN EXQUISIT PIECE
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NUCLEAR CONCEPTS- DA ILLEST CREW Niggas we dont work with tecks, we work with BOMB threats/ So fuck with us and i'll have WORD aim FAT BOY 2 at you and your whole set/- S.S. |
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IP: CC5F FBE5
i liked the hook, it was hard
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IP: DF7B C8F7
thnx for the feedback, but whats with the free posters
i mean " i liked the hook it was hard" is hardlt constructive anyways thnx.....keep hitin it... |
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IP: CCAE A7E8
can i get some more feed at it.......
.................................... ......................its starting to wilt.....lol |
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
holla....at ya'll..................
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Not Bad
IP: 32D9 0BD3
Not bad not bad..work on it a little...multis needa little help..peace out
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Light Weight
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IP: F489 E613
Since i'm in Corrupted Visions now, I must say dog, You held C.V. down well. This shit was fuckin real, and I love that shit. The shit about bitches, cars, bling, that shit ain't me. But reading shit like this makes me breath a sigh of relief, knowin that there are some real mufuckas doing this rap shit, ya know what i'm sayin? Real dope shit you dropped man, much props.
Bigger aint better all nations should be equal Continental unity collabing in life without the evil ^^ Word to that. My only complaint is the one line in the hook, The Way It Should Be Fine Women Dating. I don't think that neccessarily belonged, ya know? Overall-- Great shit man, the content was dope, flow was on-point. -Formula. ** Feedback for my new drop, Emergency, is appreciated. Thanks in advance if you re-emberse me **
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