Replied to- wordperfect, Talon, and S.Skidds

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I feel great, like lifes a mistake but im never bein replaced
Jesus's replacement underground mc comen out the basement
Fixin up tacticks to hit up tricks faster then'a hard dick
Sure its sick i gotta flu im not a virgin im always screwed
Burnin emcees cuz im a hot element therefor killin you is erelavent
Splittin records wit gorilla tone polluted lyrics killin the ozone
A king uncrowned about to turn the tables the fuck around
Pop me, stop me, mics my property flowens my priority
Top of the athority now comen wit my demo called "extrodinary"
Cant spell im'a demon from hell label me the god who's special
Give me a handicap album so when i spit it, it wont be seldom
Come out haunted then leave the game wit a mind thats taunted
Bothered? Or you lost still in search of your dead wacked father
Thinkin he'll come back but he'll never reach you on'a false map
Life, it's all bout the gimics, so fuck the critics an gimme a hit list
Witness death in dayjavu from da beat to the rhyme that killed u
Rule, who wud'a known he cud be something next to gods throne
Maken funna limp labels who cant get hard but say they stable
Watchen braceface rappers able to pick up cable..aint stable
I'm just rambling about nothing that don't mean shit like gambling
You win once in'a while, but you got more of'a chance of dis style Your kid gettin fucked by a petifile thats real...now smile
You can't cuz your girls got locked jaw down by the unzipped zipper on my pants
I'm just trying tobe a talented emcee, now bite an i'll make you a stigma of H-I-V


Just a keystyle...thought ye all might like...replies wud be apreciated

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

yo umm that shit was tight still, but when i was reading it i lost interest, make it more interesting, when i spit, fuck i say shit to get bitches to reply... ur shit is tough keep it uppp... u sure can flow wunz i'm outtie

uppen

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

it wasnt your greatest but that didnt stop it from being a good read it was well writ and composed