I have a hard time keeping my structure consistent and it is really frustrating becuz i feel i have a hot flow and the only thing that i get back in critique is that my structure was off. plz help because i really want to elavate thank you all alot, pz and luv.

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish

Do any of you new people ever check the tutorials???

anyway here it is in a nutshell

your structure is fucked up so it probably looks like this when you put on a line
and then second line most likely is like this

but you really want it to look a little bit more like this
so that all lines are somewhat similar in size & length

First of all I did look for the tutorials so if you would like to explain this in detail for us new people in the tutorials I would appreciate it.

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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17
16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases
17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him
18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper-
19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life

20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish

ok fine good structure means having all the lines in a similar respective length

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/\bad structure

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/\ good structure