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11-09-03, 01:59 PM
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can ya help me out.....
IP: 1BD5 13B2
how do i put a pic on my signature and what do you think of this flow
yo this guyz wack/why is he here/ the only song this guy can sing is chicken and beer/ you should watch your step for i ruin your rep/ i'll spare the kids but im leaving you raped and torn/ we don't hate you/ we just hate you were born/ well rite about now my rap flowz done/ you can go back to your worthless life without any fun |
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11-09-03, 02:00 PM
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
some feedback please
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11-09-03, 04:46 PM
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IP: 9588 E886
well it was pretty bad... for one that hate the fact you were born has been used 100 times. you ryhme scheme is off. go look in the tutorial section for my ryhme scheme tutorial.... you had 0 wordplay 0 metaphors... its like you were just finding words to ryhme... keep trying... youll get better.
just upload the pic...... into your sig... |
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11-09-03, 05:23 PM
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IP: 1BD5 13B2
ya but how do i upload it??
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11-09-03, 06:53 PM
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IP: DF7B C8F7
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