Life is never what it seems//
Broken promises and shattered dreams//
Thick wounds that never heal//
Saying everything but what you feel//
If life could stop right in it’s tracks//
Rewind the end and bring it back//
Life could be so much better//
Brighter days and nicer weather//
But we can never bring it back//
And we can’t be saved when the train goes off the tracks//
Forget about being happy//
cause all life is is misery//
and fake perceptions of what it’s meant to be//
at least that’s how life seems to me//
~ SinfiC ~ 2003

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Great job once again. I liked ur analysis of life. Seems like you are writing a lot about it, and ur trying to get ur life back on those tracks. Everything was great once again. You have a hidden talent and it seems as if ur using it. Keep it up. Kick ass pic once again. Most respect.

This piece was decent, it was too lacking in depth and vocab to be much more and i'd like to inform you that you broke the rules of the forum, your only allowed one poem a day and u posted 3 on the 16th, if i were a mod u would be banned for not following the rules but since im not i can only tell you to chill out and wait a while before posting your next poem, hope you dont get banned, your poetry is unique, 1luv.

^yea thats the only downfall. You have too many on one day. You can get in a lot of trouble for it, and I also hope that you dont get banned for it.