I'm straight done with this all, without a shadow of a doubt,

Being like this is my way, maybe it was all your fault,

For being a dick and thinking everything was legit,

Shit now i know I’m just wasting my precious time,

Aligned are my thoughts with my head on straight,

You go home, go play with yourself, masturbate,

I've been set up and now this shit with my girl is downhill,

Not even after this can i reveal that I didn't even do it,

I'm done now so guess what, fuck it, screw it,

This bullshit is enough even to drive me nuts,

So I’m letting go and not caring no more,

I love you with all my heart and I hope you know,

But this constant shit must go,

Just pissing me off cause all of you want to be shiesty,

And you expect me to sit here and be nice to thee?

I need to just leave before I blow up and “hulk out”,

You know my got damn temper and that is without a doubt,

So I let myself free and not care bout this drama no more,

Because if something doesn’t happen now,

I’m walking out the nearest door…




I'm venting cause of the fucking bullshit, haters, and people that have to lie and say people did something to save there ass and cover up there insecurities. Or sraight up break something good up CAUSE YOU WILL NEVER FUCKING HAVE IT, NEVER HAD IT IN THE FIRST PLACE. NOTHER THING KEEP SETTING YOURSELF UP TO BE HURT. Back off and don't talk to me at all, U know who you are

Other wise any comments on this??

Damn... that was straight emotion right there! Scarry some of the stuff you said was bold as mess, some stuff made me say "Aww, oh no he's upset!" and other things made my jaw drop! You have the talent to do that. I hope things work out, and becomming stoic won't help anything it just makes it that much worse when you get hurt again because you have no one else to turn to. I'm not even gonna lie an say you won't get hurt again, because life, love, happiness, death, it all hurts... period. Nice drop if you ever need to talk I concider you cool people Phantasma4357 is my aim... hit me up if you wanna talk, I'm here. Peace

Stuff gets hard and this is my way to vent it. That nite i was just really crappy and I needed to let this out. Though It sounds like i'm giving up i'm not. gonna stay and fight what i know is right. Thanks calisto a lot for giving your honest comments on my work, being a friend and also someone I can talk too. Thanks much hun, Much respect JT

yo, Jimmy, me n u need to have a SERIOUS talk cause i don't know if u noticed it but some 'things' have been tearing our friendship apart, aight???

anywayz...i felt tha emotion in tha poem... good strong and emotional piece that gets ur blood pumping and boiling, would have been better if tha anger was more caged and not so wide sprung upon everything, only then would tha anger get to where u were aiming at in tha first place...

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i know dog and it's because pf the stupidest shit. Your my guy and should be put out in front with all my ppl but without a job and any hopes of a new job i'm down and outta luck. Needa save money, u kno i got bills but I ain't usin that as an excuse, Thanks for the feedback i'll hit u up soon

Wow speedy, lotz of anger. Seem to see a lot of that in ur writings now. Ya, we all kno bout ventin. Guess we've all been doin that a lot lately. Just like all ur other drops, it was good. Lots of anger. Makes ya wonder who exactly pissed you off so bad. Even tho i already kno. Keep ur head up hun, it'll eventually get better. Most respect.