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Old 11-12-03, 07:47 AM   #1
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IF I COULD THEN I WOULD (funny rap)

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if i could do shit now that i knew i shouldnt i would do more shit that people said that i shouldnt i would go out and grow a tree of home grown weed then smoke it in the park across from an elementry, thats what it was ment to be a place for me to see more than i was ment to see, and maybie if these circles wouldnt turn i could see more clearly and take a seat on the curb, but my minds to desturb from all of the doubles im seein and i think im gonna hurl, i did a couple seconds later on my best friend earl, he laugh for a second then realize he just got puked on, so he hit me with his bottle and started cusin out, im confused im a drop out, and im droped out flat on the street and the pavement, a couple hours later im still there with a face print, a couple nights later im walkin shifted and wasted, get stoped by the cops put up a fight with my bracelet, he took out his mace and sprayed it in my face, I fell to the ground and started rollin in place, but that really doesn’t put out the flame, that stop drop and roll is a bite off of jenny craig, to reduse the weight by rollin out the fat, but even a rollin pin could flattin that, its just to much to ask an impossible task hold up………..back to my story of my ass getting bullied and sued from, smoking weed at a school, but who can blame me I’m just an influence to the ones who beat up there old lady, I’m in the same cell with OJ and mike Tyson, I don’t want to be a wide receiver or a juicy substance, I just wanna be a leader is that to much to ask is the world that afraid of my un political ass, so they link me with these two bully’s, one killed his sister and the other bit a ear off and robery, so im here for smoking in an elementary, half of there bathrooms smell like smoke, infact I smelled my ten year olds sweat shirt and I started to choke, so don’t tell me it doesn’t happin a lot, cause that just means you know it happins and probably encourage it a lot, for your campain trail, get to a school and tell the kids you wont send them to jail. So what you say is that this isn’t a crime, and mine is all I did was get high.
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Old 11-12-03, 11:25 AM   #2
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I rather liked this peice, although nothing stands out enough to quote it... you need to work on your structure coz it was real messy, you got ability to pull sumting off... but I feel you failed... keep postin' Raps an next time dedicate your thoughts more to the creative element of your scripture... uppin 4 feed bk on Funn's collabo w/ Monstar...
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Old 11-12-03, 11:37 AM   #3
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