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"Gimme My Box Back Bitch!" Eye WitNesS 5 24 11-07-03 02:23 PM by Funn DementaLL suicide (what would u do?) .:alliK:. 11 56 11-07-03 02:21 PM by Funn DementaLL [ - Chameleon - ] Edicius 8 29 11-07-03 02:17 PM by Funn DementaLL ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Funn: Born into poverty, I'm a victim upon many/ A sinner is a 'peice' of mind which makes an 'automatic' a 'semi'/ hangin' wit the same dudes that stain cocain on twenties/ loving the smell of crack, stash the notes an pay in pennies/ an, NUMBERS ain't DONE ME, see AGE-DON'T-MEAN-SHIT/ It's bout how many rush you dummies, an breakin' ya pieces/ Star: if ya learn any lessons that life teaches is that the nine reaches the nine ceases ya life and that of each one of ya nine nieces so i say fuck whats giving bitch, i'm here to take whats mine and throw more steal in ya neck than muthafuckin Frankenstein death is eternal, my minds trapped in a one story burning inferno Star and Funn commander and chief to all the soldiers and colonels Funn: No matter what they say, there's no coming back from the grave/ misleadin' thoughts that stay in my mind, an crush my brain/ which shuts down any COGITATION, IDEA, HEED or INTENSION I have/ all I do is see it, write it and then record it in my lab/ I Rap, coz I wanna make a CHANGE, like a rehab/ by exposing the wisdom that lays under my skull cap/ my arteries be punchered, so I-SPIT-FROM-THE-HEART/ breathin' easy, gettin SET, before I TAKE MY MARKS/ Coz If it's a HUMAN RACE, then I jus won it/ academically a gimmick, you know nothin' of it/ Star: fuck the human race, Star and Funn control all earths species the way i shit on these kids got ya thinkin my names birth feces my thought process is complex, shit i can levitate objects hurl em across the room to stop ya progress, Star the monster of loch ness Star and Funn a combo of deadly proportions, deadly with the force when i flow heavy and bend you all outta shape like i spit contortions i cook up emcees, and serve up amazement, disturbed word placement the kid bananas cause the flow ape shit, we the best out face it why yall dudes not goin nowhere like birds flyin in the basement Star and Funn define greatness, were god like the way we float in the air weightless |
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"How often do I have to un-load this shit to get a rating//
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Yo, i liked the whole colab, it was pretty dope. Like the E.G for the feedback, haha! Peace homies
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uppin for some feedback on this mofo...
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uppin yet again for some feedback on this....
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i liked your collab..you two go well together..peace out
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liked the multis and metaphors.Good vocab as well,Ya'll did a good collab. Stay ^
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uppin dis, coz we ain't get the attention I feel we deserved!!!
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desperate to up this .lol
anyway i dont blame u with those wack ass replies^ pretty good collab though the flow was good from both sides..although the rhymes were quite simple at times some word play in there from both which was good..the first bit about guns was pretty wack though seriouslyy gun talk on the net is just stupid even if it is metaphorical appart from that it was a good read quite simple but collabed well 'death is eternal, my minds trapped in a one story burning inferno Star and Funn commander and chief to all the soldiers and colonels ^thought that was one of your best lines Mon 'my arteries be punchered, so I-SPIT-FROM-THE-HEART/ breathin' easy, gettin SET, before I TAKE MY MARKS ^funn's best imo props |
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