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Old 11-11-03, 12:26 PM   #1
Keys aka Vital
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Liquid Courage

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Your slender PLUS rhymes don't EQUATE
I fluidize the science you create and liquate
My rhymes are a bouquet that flourish
My vocab and wordplay nourish this liquid courage
The blood that's pumped, the water I hold
The inner-coating of my esophagus is gold
Yours is fluff, what i speak is uncontrolled
Prophetic emcee since B.C. foretold
Beats bang and pound
My rhymes are profound
I bought too much property now to lose ground
My every word beams a seething lightsaber
My time in the game is too much to lose labor
Every battle I decode, I'm elected in favor
The way you stuf the ballot box is unlike a player
My liquid courage burns ya flesh drastic
Impressive and classic hurt like hydrochloric acid
Hammerin your face into rubber-band elastic
Surgery for the burn is Dino-Rhinoplastic
Liquid courage can only be held in cryo-genic freezers
Hand contact renders spine epidemic seizures
I got remedies-you afraid if I test it
Liquid Courage ne the wackness antiseptic
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Old 11-11-03, 01:01 PM   #2
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ay that was a nice open mic homie nice flow and rhymes. keep it up dawg and check ya PM homie.
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Old 11-11-03, 01:15 PM   #3
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nice man, got as scientific as canibus there. sick, ill unwackness, ha ha.
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Old 11-11-03, 08:14 PM   #4
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rookie of the year

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I'm the new kat in the crowd all y'all old folks get ready it's gonna get real loud. I got a fresh new clip that'll shoot six shots right through that nigga lip and fuck up his new whip. Wait a new whip? how did that lie sneak out my white lips? he aint drivin no bm or bentley machine that niggas broke he don't have no cream or a team for that matter, i think one of those sluggs penetrated his bladder. oops sorry i guess hes just scared cuz he heard my flows blarred right in his fucken ear. y'all better check back i won't be hear next year...
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Old 11-11-03, 08:18 PM   #5
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^^ wat tha fuck, shut up...

anywayz...it was aight, nothin new, nothin too old in terms of deliverin a thought but it could be used to look back on n get inspiration from, not an actual verse, good vocab too...aight then, out...
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Old 11-12-03, 12:04 PM   #6
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uppin for more critizizm
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