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[ - Chameleon - ]
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Chameleon
Ignorin.. the clear and powerfull signs.. of warn, blendin in situations so they can do me no harm. Exposin myself the way everyone had expected, can i be me?.. or is the risk to big.. to be rejected. Adjustin myself to the inviorement, im i save?, no!the fragile remains,&u get back what u gave. Many times thought it over,a place to disappear, so i can be me, free the way i jus am without fear. Feelin like a wreck,my mind's playin games with me, is this my final destination? is this really ment to be ? Is resisting an option?they say u must never give up, goes for everything?even if u this deep down& stuck. The chameleon is adjustin him self when hes in danger, hes protected,. for now cuz the abillity to be a changer. But is he really save?. maybe inside his fear is just risin, Realisin that this hidin is just a weak point,and despisin. Strange simalaritys who are there,to the chameleon& me, i'm often blend in to painfull, situations cuz i cant be free. Or tell a lie cuz i cant confront other people with the truth, maybe its wrong, somthimes i must agree but what is truth? Cuz honestly last longer, but somtimes it isnt always best, and its easier to not go in to a struggle and jus give it a rest. Or just dont want to hurt that other ones feelings is that good? arent u just hurting it by not bein honest,to satisfy their mood!. What do do and what not, keeps haunting thru my mind, and there are so muchs different.. views on it of any kind. Confusing me so i take the easy road, and maybe thats a sin, but i think i just keep actin like a Chameleon and just blend in. I guess the solution to most question's will be answered un-remained. Fgee - Sunk! Bribe1one - SS verse Lm - Im sorry
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tight concept delivery and over all verse one pop you never sees to impress me
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I never impress u?...
lol^^.. Thnx? Man from now on...i call u Riddle-Man
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Hoe's = )
1 Reply da fuck?
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Deep Piece... Made Me Think... I Can Relate To It A Lot... I Find Myself Blending In With My Surrounding In Fear Of Rejection In Places I'm Not Use To Going... But Nice Piece... Good Emotion
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Eddy.
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Werd
Thnx Up^
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Oh Yeah... And Drop Feedback On The Links In My Sig... ( Open Mic )
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Impressive material, enjoyed the read...
sometimes when rappers use the same word twice eg cam'ron wit his dam PIZZA rhyme on diplomats... it don't work but your a cat who can pull it out the hat... uppin dis!!! |
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Up^^
Cmon damn ....lol^
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Eddy.
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Omg..
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Good concept,good use of imagery an visionary,meant amot as it had me thinkin bout the issues you talked about,descent vocab,flowed well,overall a nice read dawg.
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Thnx..Up^
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I liked your hook... it brought your verse into perspective and
gave me an idea on what your topic was... most cats forget to do that... props... your flow and structure was good, although I was getting the vibe like it was more of a poem... just by the way you worded some lines. overall though, this is one of the best peices i've seen... uppin this for ya. ~AshY~ |
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i liked it all good topic good flow good vocab keep it up
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