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View Poll Results: Who got dis shit?
obsenity 0 0%
J~Dubs 5 100.00%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 11-11-03, 04:39 PM   #1
J~Dubs
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obsenity Vs J~dubs

IP: 4577 CD9A

10 lines
no crew
no hate
no d/r
no feedin
blind spit 15 minutes to drop or u get dqued and lose
 
Old 11-11-03, 04:51 PM   #2
obsenity
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yo heres my 10 line verse

Yo ur rhymes are weak like wet cardboard//
My shit makes the sidewalk jealous cuz they so hardcore//
Imma end ya life, the way i slap dis dike//
Rip off ya fingas and watch ya try to grab da mic//
I go deep in my work, haywire to bizerk//
Cuz my punchlines are so rugged they’re startin to hurt//
I’m one not to be fucked with, the type to start a fight//
So get off me rhymes, BITCH, they’re to hard to bite//
Nigga if ya ever did make it ya albums wouldn’t hit da shelves//
And u couldn’t fuck me over if u were R. KELLY and I was 12/////

accetped at 4:37

uppin for some fuckin votes yall come on.
 
Old 11-11-03, 04:54 PM   #3
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This nigga's losses is gonna be increased gettin added to my of Deceased
I spittin some shit thats gonna have u gettin roasted more than a thanksgiving feast
I spit nuttin but straight fire leavin this newbie turin to ashes
After this battle its gonna look like u was in war wit all yo gashes
Ya rhymes couldnt be dope if u was spittin some rhymes after smokin a blunt
ya had to change tha rules up cause ya ass is a pussy or should i say cunt
my record is 1 and 0 and bout to be 2 and 0 after i drop dis hoe
christmas is around tha corner u betta ask santa 4 some flow
this nigga prolly bite so shit cause he whackest emcee on rapbattles
cause i'ma slice them emcee and leave him wit more beef than most cattle
 
Old 11-11-03, 05:01 PM   #4
J~Dubs
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tha last to lines should read:

this nigga prolly bit some shit cause he's da whackest emcee on rapbattles
cause i'ma slice this emcee and leave him wit more beef than most cattle
 
Old 11-11-03, 05:13 PM   #5
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ay yall uppin for some votes in this shit yall....

=come on uppin __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _____
 
Old 11-11-03, 05:18 PM   #6
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ITE drop a honest vote on dis http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9329#post899329 n ill repay da favour...........pz
 
Old 11-11-03, 05:22 PM   #7
Nitemarre
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Yo Honest votez.........J-Dubs had better wordplay even a meta or two....obsenity's verse was straight but not enough wordplay really. The hardcore-sidewalk thing was wack...............elevate
J-Dubs
repay the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90916
 
Old 11-11-03, 05:28 PM   #8
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aight yall its 1-0 and J has the lead but we still need more votes even tho nitemares vote was BS but w/e uppin for some more.
 
Old 11-11-03, 05:35 PM   #9
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uppin for some votes yall come on __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ _________________________
 
Old 11-11-03, 05:35 PM   #10
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j dub got dis jst cus of wordplay but it was complicated ,but not bad.close yall.............................................. ob can u poll on mine plz............................thx...........pz
 
Old 11-11-03, 05:38 PM   #11
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ay yall now its 2-0 J winnig and we need some more votes in this bitch yall and lemme point out my ending line and his simple rhymes. w/e ppl are bullshitting votes
 
Old 11-11-03, 06:48 PM   #12
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quit swayin juss cause ur losing be a man bout it damn!! aint no1 on them childish games.....................
 
Old 11-11-03, 07:58 PM   #13
J~Dubs
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uppin 4 votes
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Old 11-11-03, 08:04 PM   #14
Darkest Knight
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not 2 hate but J dubs took this by far, better word play and better punchlines...anyways yo yall check out my battle with lil red15...thnks
 
Old 11-11-03, 08:44 PM   #15
e.coli
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i didnt really see any hard hitting punches or anything in this battle..............so i got to go wit the dude wit better wordplay..........J dubs took this......no hate obsenity he just had more wordplay and creativity.............u both need to add personals to your rhymes as well.....
 
 


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