Listen to this beat and give me some feedback

"Tight Ass Beat"

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hMm, listening....

intro is kinda african....

i can tell this is a fruity beat, i dont like the overall melody, and your mixing skills need work, the drums are way too low...

lisnin...

that synth sound has potential. i'd maybe cut the note length thou, maybe write sum additional switch ups as well.

the drums r weak. mostly cus all u can hear is the kick...but even wit the snare turned up the arrangment could still be much better. on top of that u need to collect sum better sounds.

hint: www.loops.net download sum drum loops and isolate the first kick. a harder kick would make it 10 times better.

keep at it..pc

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