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HOOK:
this game is rough, and the fame is tough
but is it worth the pain, the blame, and the shame??
blood stains, bags of flame, balls of cocaine and 100% grain
tell me again, is it worth the pain?

is it the fame or the shame that inspires people to blame?
came with similar game still we aint the same
we reign while you cowards still flame on with your flowers
you cower when you should of been acknowledging our power
tower above the rest, flesh of my flesh, chest is what we hit next
test the rest, find out from the best that our shit is blessed
messed the game up and came up with new shit, now we rule it
fools sit when they should of been standing with a med kit
throwing fits when they see our shit is a new hit single
we mingle with the concept of turning a beef track into a christmas jingle
now chris cringle better keep an eye out, we got him our sights
we ready to fight, and ready to steal his shit like it was our right
pawn it off and buy enough weed to get higher than a kite
now that we feelin light, we roll up some more real tight
(inhale) riiiight
still satan infiltrates all the time, seen him on the corner at midnight
hes in our sights through all the blight and the fights
the might of god has no effect if those are not willing to accept
check yourself and learn everything you need to stay adept
for if you fall off your soul is what will be kept
creep in and catch a joint before i get taken in
but until then, ill stay a soldier and accept my sins
let it begin, for I am the don, these are my brothers
they got tons of guns and would love to fuck you up for fun
your stunned, they cock that thing back and laugh
stack the cash and leave the rest for the trash
mash out and enter with body bags with extra tags and enough grass to pass the time
find out from a friend of mine that everything is based on the grind
Deal with slime and come out ontop with atleast a pound of kind
rhymes so different, yet they basically the same
most came from the same place, tryin to get by in third place
livin life like it was a race, faster you are the more you need to change your pace
case your wonderin im warning you, be thankful for everything i have showed you
through all our songs, all the bong rips and the trips to the zoo
fools use to look up to you, but you showed em who you have become
son, you let us down, found out what you did, told you it was cool to come
some still had respect, but we overwhelmed the odds, shots rang out, your body dropped cold
your cards now fold, told you never to change, then you entered our range
most days i feel insane, but now i know that one day our rhymes will be what tames the flames...

HOOK:
this game is rough, and the fame is tough
but is it worth the pain, the blame, and the shame??
blood stains, bags of flame, balls of cocaine and 100% grain
(pause 2 seconds)
tell me again, is it worth the pain?
blood stains, bags of flame, balls of cocaine and 100% grain
The blame and the shame will come, are you man enough to step up and reign?

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This was pretty cool. It had some good rhymes and vocab. Keep it up.

this was ok, it came across alright, but the vocab was a little basic, it flow'd nicely, but would have been smoother if the structure was better, but all in all it was ok...not bad....keep dropp'n ....Pc....