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Old 11-16-03, 10:16 PM   #1
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do my thing

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hook:no matta wat i do/imma stay tru/and do how i want 2/and do my thing/u can hate all u want/u can copy and front/but imma stunt/and do my thing/no matta if im young/dis rap game aient 4 fun/cuz im second 2 nun/so throw it up cuz im doin my thing/

i cant help it 4 who i am/its how i raised 2 stop where i stand/u aient got 2 like me but u will respect me/and i do wat i say so dont regret me/im jus a kid dat dont care wat u think/its my life so imma do my thing/dont care bout he say and she say/its my turn so imma do it my way/

hook:no matta wat i do/imma stay tru/and do how i want 2/and do my thing/u can hate all u want/u can copy and front/but imma stunt/and do my thing/no matta if im young/dis rap game aient 4 fun/cuz im second 2 nun/so throw it up cuz im doin my thing/

jus da 1st page aient got 2 da 2nd chapter/i do stunts and risk like fear factor/whoeva said it or where i can give da least/they jus mad cuz da kid cant be beat/jus another kid who young and hungry/sit back and wait 4 da second story
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Old 11-16-03, 10:43 PM   #2
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Well Kid...

Dat Wasnt Actually To Bad...

Other Den Da Structure...

Make It (One Sentence....)

(Nest Sentence)...

Otherwise Not Bad Piece...

Keep Workin...

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