it took ten years for this rose to grow
through the blazin sun and the rain it didn't blossom
the country was jamaica an lots of other roses grew
but just this 1 seed had plenty of light but did not suceed
its dream was too grow healthy in the sun an be merry
but even when it rained it still remained the same
while every other living thing blosson into jeez
but this lil flower was born into misery
when winter in the carribean finally came
an the weather declined an finally changed
all the other flowers finally died and shrivelled up
but the rose still never grew, it remained the same,

if u know the story behind that then u feel me, safe

Intresing peice

not to much to say about it

not to bad

keep uppin

sorry i dont know what your talking about so i cant really judge but it cool man


~peace~

Good piece. At first it was a lil weird, but then it got better. U did a good job on it. A lot of imagery in it. Flow was ok, and structure was fine. Overall good work. I think I got the meaning behind this.