10 lines
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
5 wins
No hate, crew or dr votes
No feeding
No recycling
Due by Wendseday

Pass me a vote an I'll return the favor........................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93904

Yo name is ape then u belong in da zoo/
I can't believe I'm wasting my time battling u/
When battling me u betta use common sense/
'fore i hit u in da jaw having u mumbling like 50 cent/
Your Avatars the closest you done got to a dime/
You "Michael Jackson" lil boys the rest of the time/
U a pitiful excuse for New York representer/
I'll kick you back to the Congo wit da rest of the Guerrillas/
Im bout to go buy yo mama mink/
In rememberance of her son Ape who now is extinct/

Ehh, here, nothing special...

You Bust more Heads with ya lip than I do with my clip/
Ya shouldnt-a been John instead-a Neal, because you full of shit/
I sun you so bad ya only Punches ya got is Capri drinks/
Ya verse is so Gay, I think I should slap ya with Elton John links/
Take ya skull of ya sholders, then thats the only time you a-head/
The only time peeps call ya name is at Church, to prey you stay dead/ (Understand?...Neal, Kneel)
You get killed in the Front Lines quicker than Marines in Iraq/
Make this Pussy Bleed so much people start handing him Tampax/
When ever I look at ya verse it makes me laugh, you made my day/
Hey, if it was never for You, Richard Simmons would never br Gay/

I drop my links here...

I cant edit my verse so I can drop the links (dont know why)...but here are my votes.

UnEmceeAble .vs. Chem

WTF!!! I cant edit my lat post with my second vote. This sucks!!!

Well, heres my second vote...

Winey Bitch .vs. ..K..

Get ya votes in Neal. Uppin' for votes as well. And can someone also tell me how to edit the post so that I can post two votes in one post.

Yo name is ape then u belong in da zoo/
I can't believe I'm wasting my time battling u/
When battling me u betta use common sense/
'fore i hit u in da jaw having u mumbling like 50 cent/
Your Avatars the closest you done got to a dime/
You "Michael Jackson" lil boys the rest of the time/
U a pitiful excuse for New York representer/
I'll kick you back to the Congo wit da rest of the Guerrillas/
Im bout to go buy yo mama mink/
In rememberance of her son Ape who now is extinct/


flow...6
punches...4
wordplay..4
multies..3
structure...6
vocab...5
overall..28

Ehh, here, nothing special...

You Bust more Heads with ya lip than I do with my clip/
Ya shouldnt-a been John instead-a Neal, because you full of shit/
I sun you so bad ya only Punches ya got is Capri drinks/
Ya verse is so Gay, I think I should slap ya with Elton John links/
Take ya skull of ya sholders, then thats the only time you a-head/
The only time peeps call ya name is at Church, to prey you stay dead/ (Understand?...Neal, Kneel)
You get killed in the Front Lines quicker than Marines in Iraq/
Make this Pussy Bleed so much people start handing him Tampax/
When ever I look at ya verse it makes me laugh, you made my day/
Hey, if it was never for You, Richard Simmons would never br Gay/


flow...7
punches...7
wordplay..7
multies..6
structure...8
vocab...7
overall..42


APE TOOK THIS WIT EAZE...
both can up ur shit...juss the other kat needz 2 work a lot more...

peace

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THE RESTRICTED WUN HAS ROZE 2 CONQUER.....AGAIN!


I'M BACK!!!

Need elevation? Pleeeeeease. I just threw a couple words together because I didnt want to waste a verse on that. But thanks for the vote.

1 up me.

Ape took this battle all tha way wit tha punches and all.... Neal, u need to do sum big time elevatin man.... This wasnt good at all.... VOTE - Ape

Ape took this 1 cuz he was original. Neal I hurd yo shit all before work harder and get better then see wusup!

punches: ape
flow: ape
personals: nill
structure: ape
ejoyment: ape

nearly one sided

peace

4-0 me. 2-0 me on the polls. One of you didnt vote. Try to please. Also, can we start breaking down the verses so we know if we are doing the right thing or not. Thanks.

Uppin'. 4-0 me. 3-0 in the poll. Please break 'em down. Wait, did or did I not already KO him? I dont know, keep voting please.