im back, got the streets on lock and got the block ready to be knocked/
im back, got my gun cocked to blow any motherfuckers head that got people shocked/
goin through the league poppin peeps arms off, got the legs poppin and especially doin some booty poppin/
take you down low where you cant grow where your stoppin and i be bootleggin any shit you be coppin/
crushin you down lower below zero where no known hero can save from what you startin/
police chasin down yo block but im so powerful i can get the police to get high on stocks n rocks/
why you wanna compete against one of the elite youll just end up off yo feet/
yo rhymes too petit and you cant even cheat to verbally get through me/
why you disrespectin, you challengin me, well when you come youll be gone faster than marky/
i make you feel the VIBRATIONS yeah can you feel it/
im like winona rider so ill just steal it/
no hard feelings but you lost cause your too weak/
dont even speak youll be gone off this site in a week/
youll never reach the peak that many get up to/
you sayin everything false like bush said uranium was true/
i have no clue of what you do but if it includes a mic your screwed/
i see no success in yo future so you better go leave to a priest for a bless/
im just showin what im doin that none of you have a chance youll just be losin/
yeah it was fun typin this shit on a pc screen now its over/
merry christmas and a happy new year cause this will be the last time you be spittin that youll remember/
ha ha ha

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I am gonna be what i wanna be, but not just what i wanna be but what i am.

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It doesnt matter if you win as long as you give everything in your heart

- michael jordan

I am gonna be what i wanna be, but not just what i wanna be but what i am.

- 2hot2handle(myself)

your flow was a little off due to the fact that the structure wasn't perfect..... you might wanna try a syllable count thats kinda how i make sure my shit flows..right...when you spit it it prolly all works out...i was feelin it in most stages at times i thought you had some forced multis good drop though playa keep doing your thing peace out...

This was ok...your structure needs some work thought, try keeping the lines all around the same length so its structured good and so it helps your flow out...you had some ok multies, try to work on those though....vocab in this was alright.....but overall this was ok...and keep at it.

Not bad Word play could have been better. Decent vocabulary. All together not really feelin it although if it was audio it might sound tight. Not bad though, stay focused.