Regime Collab:The Introduction - 13th Disciple
What I think of RB - Funn DementaLL
Rap Magnetism - Wogzta

I wrote this bout all the people who try and be somethin their not and be untrue to themselves. I love this peice.


Verse 1
Show no love to fake thugs/
Claimin you down on your luck and fire slugz/
When really you got a butler and tiger skin rugz/
You say sorry when our loved ones die like you give a fuck/
You handin out hugz like you came from a street institution/
But you aint witnessed prostatution/
You cant cure the streetz you aint got the solution/
We've all accepted that our death is loomin/
While you a higher class gettin a groomin/
Years pass quikly like a superbike zoomin, you sit and relax/
All happy without a care while we gotta watch our backs/
You got money, all we got is the c.ds on our racks/
You aint one of us, so just face the facts/

Chorus X2
Don't play yourself, you aint me/
Soon you'll see that a thug is what you'll never be/
You got doormen, we use a key/
Don't ever say you see the things I see/.

Verse 2
Why you frontin'/
Drivin round in a lexus, eyein up hoe's with beats bumpin'/
Are you tryin ta prove a point or somethin?/
Pretendin you don't go out fox huntin/
Tryin to buy a good humpin from a fine bitch/
An innocent girl on the streets but in the bedroom she's a witch/
She only with you coz your rich/
Her finger twitches when on the trigger like she got an itch/
She'll dump you in a ditch for bein fake/
Nobody will turn up for your wake coz you lost all respect/
Fuckin about is somethin you gon' regret/
You said you were a thug bout really you were wet/
You now wish that bitch was somebody you never met/

Chorus X2
Don't play yourself, you aint me/
Soon you'll see a thug is what you'll never be/
You got doormen, we use a key/
Don't ever say you see the things I see/.


EXPLANATION:
Pretendin you don't go out fox huntin/ = fox huntin is what posh people do in the UK

If you like this then check out 'We livin In a Hell' feat executive.

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

yeah, i liked it, the topic was nice and i liked the hook, it was a bit basic in some ways, like the vocab and the rhymin scheme, but thats fuck all, some drops dont need complexity.......like a said liking it dawg..........Pc....

this was a pretty tight drop .. didn't have a lot of vocabulary .. not that it's bad .. that's good for people that can't understand big words .. so this drop could easily be understood .. this drop seemed to be a diss to all fakes in this world and yet it's deep .. i liked it .. and the following is what got to me:







tight piece .. keep droppin cozzo .. think you can return the favor? get at me...

IT WAS ON POINT SEE ROOM FOR IMPROVEMENT BUT YOU GOT YOUR POINTS FOR AN ILL DROP

Yo thanks for the comments

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

nice, nice drop, simple but in its own way it had a complex structure, you all complimented each over nicely.
LM you've elevated a lot since you join the site, nice drop y'all
keep em cummin

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Thanks for the comments...keep 'em comin

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

7/10

every thing was nice and shit, just i
wasn't feelin' the flow dat much. Nice
every thing else though. i like flow
more than other things, so some
people might classify it in a hole
'nother state of illness

this piece was dope for the most part..... you need to up your vocab & the flow needs some work.... but otherwise this was great, had some good meaning to it and good lyrics...... peace

I liked it, the flow was dope, and the vocab used was in detail and discriptive. It's really tight when you can use words to discribe feelings, it was happening, laced up nice
keep it up and take ez

Peace

Thanks. Keep 'em comin

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect