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Old 11-20-03, 11:03 PM   #1
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SS:Broken Silence

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Amy needs a payday...................checks the want ads
Circle's 'secratary wanted', no experience on demand
Hair down, showed up, interviewed;well dressed man
Smiled as she shook his hand.....he had another plan
'Well miss, I far a I can tell..........your clearly qualified'
But I have an imperative question...what's ure bra size?
A nervous chuckle, a loose belt buckle; a kid to support
'Your hired baby, now lets put the O in memo report'
Long hours, late nights, days later they both got raises
Amy got baby food but lost self respect, cubicles are cages
He calls her into his office, 'my pencil needs sharpening'
She said, no not today sir............. and I'm not bargining
He laughed and said 'baby I'm gonna get what I want'
Her handgun broke her silence.......
In business you only get one shot!
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Old 11-20-03, 11:09 PM   #2
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Replied to:
Original Ill Diss - Ill-mental
Straightjakit - Fucking snitches
Original Ill Diss - C-Section

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Old 11-20-03, 11:20 PM   #3
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nice piece. good flow and rhyme.
good idea for a little piece though, ya got a little story going there, i like the ending. is this like womens right or something? haha jk

check out my keystyle if u want
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Old 11-20-03, 11:44 PM   #4
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^thanks for the feedback

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Old 11-21-03, 02:33 AM   #5
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oh yeah hit my key styles up in open mic if ya get a chance
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Old 11-21-03, 02:18 PM   #6
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