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Old 11-24-03, 06:17 PM   #1
Duke_AkA_I*k
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Fences (jail time)

IP: D111 F954

My uncle...
the one who taught me music
the one who taught me life
the one who was my older brother
now is surrounded by thick metal pipes
sharp razors, fences, shot guns
armed officers who dont care about their loved ones
locked like an animal
no respect, life is ruined, pretty much your fucked
the only thing he has ta live fa is my love
hes my father, my role model, my brother, my best friend
he is the one who taught me write frum wrong
he played me my first song
he showed me the life i knew i wanted
he showed me girls that he wanted
he showed me his lyrix and his music
and ever since i saw them i knew i wanted to do it.....
but now since he is confined
he makes and pushes me ta get signed
hes gonna live in the mansion wit me in some time
hes gonna be the one who is right by my side
2 generations of pimps
1 out, 1 locked--why did they have to take him?
he did nothin wrong hes a good citizen
but they dont give a fuck about that
they dont care bout the well being of us
they dont care bout rap
all they care bout is splittin up familys
and makin mothers cry
takin people away
they dont no how it feels inside
they dont no shit
they dont kno what its like behind fences
its like a raging fire that will never quit
till he finishes his sentence

this is real shit that came frum my heart in love fa my uncle so show some love ta ya homie Duke AkA Ik iight
UnO
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Old 11-24-03, 06:43 PM   #2
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Damn. This is some deep shit. I can really tell that this came from ur heart. U didnt even have to say it was. All of the emotion was felt, and believe me, i can relate. You did a great job. Everything was great. Keep it up. Much respect. Deep emotion and it was all felt.
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Old 11-24-03, 08:12 PM   #3
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thanx fa replyin...i apprieciate it a lot, lez get some more replies on this tho
UnO
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Old 11-24-03, 09:02 PM   #4
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that was a nice drop a lot of emotion running throught it and you can tell it came from ur heart. you did a great job
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