Sweety i cannot picture my life without you~
You hold me close in physical and spirit~
when in the physical you make me shout boo~
when we're physical you hear it~

my love for you is true~
i cannot contain my passion in my chest~
i love you but you dont have a clue~
so i fashoin myself in a dress~

a dress that reveals more~
then my late mother ever advised~
as a result your touch i feel more~
and i more often bask in your eyes~

In time our love got greater~
as i continued to yell soft~
at 16 our love we couldnt fade her~
but before our 17th it fell off~

baby boy it was that one unprotected time~
valentines day back in 0-1~
i felt your whole so fine~
and slowly caressing tongue~

but our love died that day~
or at least the following weeks~
my stomach swole i couldnt find a way~
following you a felt weak~

watching you adorn yourself with girls not me~
tore my heart in ways i did not run it~
but i gave you your daughter shorty~
felt her kicking in my stomach~

and when my darkest hour fell~
you lay at my side~
you placed on my forehead a flower pedal~
and i prayed for your pride~

you wifed me baby boy~
our life had no end~
but thats when shit got shady boy~
for your heart i had to contend~

yeah i caught you with that "lady"~
i thought this ring meant more for us~
now you cant be caught with our baby~
faith went out the door with trust~

so you weathered the storm for days on end~
not nearly long enough a while~
but your not only my love my friend~
your my husband...and i love your smile~

bleh my wife wrote it with small edits by me for more graphic material, u dont really need to critique just thought i'd post it, 1luv.

i Thaught it was straight dawg

you gotta good wife

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Oh... your wife wrote this. Ok then. 'Cause for a second I thought you wrote this for your husband. I mean, not that theirs anything wrong with it. George Castanza's father is gay.

Ah, but for real. This was solid and raw all the way wrap around. Good stuff, and an enjoyable read.

~Irenic~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

^thanks both, and thanks Necro means, a lot comin from you man, elevation is key, 1luv.

This is great. A good peice slept on once again. fagget world, j/k. Basically after evrything is happening you still stay by her side and not run off when the baby comes. I respect that more that anyone else could. I see my friends gettin hit up and there boys running. It takes a heart to stay and fight and be there for your child and watch him/her grow up. Respect from the heart man Spect JT

^thanks man, im just tryna be a good guy you feel? but holla back, elevation is key, 1luv.