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Old 11-22-03, 12:48 PM   #1
NOTORIOUS BIGTOM
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"Fake ass Gangsters"

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yo i need 2 hit these fake ass gangsters up.....

i h8 all these fake rappers spitin this shit//
sayin they got gats and guns but ther no truth in this bitch//
coz i love they way they try, love the way boast, love the way they say they from the east or west coast//
fake ass mutherfuckers wid nuttin 2 write, shit... they shudnt b on this muther-fukin god damn site!!//
for real i wasnt raised from the streets, neva packed heat on the streets or made ma' name on the streets or take a girl to the beach //
at least now i got the ballz 2 admit that im normal, didnt cum from the gutter or make an AKA 'stutter'//
i rite ma rhymes from the heart, i say wat i feel, i say wat i wan and i say wats real................
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Old 11-22-03, 12:51 PM   #2
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. . .

Seriously. . This Was Wack Man. Horrible Flow. Some Of Your Lines Didn't Even Make Sense.

Example :

for real i wasnt raised from the streets, neva packed heat on the streets or made ma' name on the streets or take a girl to the beach //
at least now i got the ballz 2 admit that im normal, didnt cum from the gutter or make an AKA 'stutter'//

^^ What The Hell ?

Honestly, You Need Some Work Man. There Is A Wackness Emergency Center Here, Take A Visit. Also, You Over-Used The Curses Man.

"mother-fuckin god damn site"

^^ Not Needed.

Elevate Big Time.

-Formula.
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Old 11-22-03, 12:59 PM   #3
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i hope ur not notorious for spittin shit like that.......that shit was garbage. u need help pimp. elevation is needed
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Old 11-22-03, 04:10 PM   #4
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Yo man u need to workon every aspect of yur lines not hatin jus' elevate cause that was whack
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