i miss you boi...
i miss everything about you..
i miss the way you used to pull me into your warm embace
and the way you used to kiss me...
i miss the lingering scent of your cologne after every hug
and the way you used to call me all the time and get upset whenever i wouldnt talk...
i seriously miss it all....
i miss the way you used to kiss my neck,
the way you used to flirt,
i miss the way you used to nibble on my body,
and the way you used toact like a jerk till i laughed....
i miss how happy i was...
and how happy you were too...
i wish this had never happened...
i wish i had never found out....

sry pple but i went from anger to depression and i know its gotta be longer and picked over but i just cant take that much stress yet...thx for all the feed back on my stuff btw... your all great..it mens alot for me to hear that pple like mt stuff

This was a great piece. Length doesnt really matter here. Just put down what your feelings are and ppl will give you feedback. I can relate with you 120% on this. I went through the same emotions. I liked this piece and everything on it, in my opinion, was great. Imagery was awesome. Times are hard, and we all just gotta keep our heads up and everything will eventually work out in the end. This was one of your best. Keep it up. Much respect.

ooh! thank you... for saying this was my best i mean....i hope i never have to go thru this ever again.... it hurts way much... aight well ty for the feed back..mmfcl! peace

Wow.. a lot of emotion and good imagery... it didnt have to be longer really.. it was good the way it was. I can relate to this, definitely. Nice piece ma.

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