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11-21-03, 03:17 PM
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Hannibal VS Tribz
IP: C1DA C961
8 lines
no crew,hate,or dr Tribz is droppin first |
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11-21-03, 03:25 PM
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IP: F678 AD90
aight droppin now
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11-21-03, 03:32 PM
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IP: F678 AD90
Pray for a MIRACLE DOG, i SWEAR THAT YOU LOST
facing a SPIRITUAL GOD, before the first bar I've FINISHED YOU OFF! I speak in tongues, SYLLABLES MORSED with such a CRITICAL FORCE my 'delivery got kids hooked' like AMBILLICAL CORDS! Tribz fights back dont QUESTION THE SORE SPLEENS leave fists-in-cuffs, a bunch of "twisted-fucks" like "DYSLEXICS IN PORN SCENES!" I FEAST UPON THIS CANNIBAL, Hannibal dont deny pain This kids "FUCKED UP" cuz he "LIKES FRIED BRAIN" (triple meaning if you can decypher) |
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11-21-03, 03:37 PM
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IP: 4367 B058
yo that was hot, and yeah i got the triple metaphor, u betta break it down for those who don't or u may lose soem votes, ill hti this again after lectior spits...good verse
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Worthy of awe and praise Respect "..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
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11-21-03, 03:38 PM
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IP: 4367 B058
i mean it wasnt that good, i liked a few lines, it coudl have been way hotter, in an 8 liner u have no room for filler
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Worthy of awe and praise Respect "..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
<center>HemiSphere The Write Side Of Your Mind</center> <imgsrc=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/attachmentid=8588&stc=1>
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11-21-03, 03:45 PM
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IP: F678 AD90
wheres the filler? sh kid cuz there isnt one
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11-21-03, 05:06 PM
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IP: F678 AD90
up for hanible maybe hell spit sometime this year
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11-21-03, 06:05 PM
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IP: 399E F0FD
stfu...can u see i was offline peep his location ya'll
The growin room is where u and ya illiterate rhymes should be// When u had to break down ya rhymes I could tell u was newbie// I’m Hannibal lector and tribz is the first emcee to be ate’n// U swear I lost?…ur goin to hell and meeting satin// Ur an Idian u got a spear..I got chrome to make u moan// U claimin that was critical force?..u had not 1 punch thrown// I’m prayin but its for u cause ya soul is soon to be lost// Ya rhymes are only tight once a year like tha snowman jack frost// |
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11-21-03, 06:18 PM
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IP: 2A4D CF45
flow..Tie
punches..Tribz vocab...Tie originality...Tribz metaphors..Tribz personals...Tie overall....Tribz but alot of played lines in both verses but good for a newbe battle...keep it up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93131 |
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11-21-03, 06:19 PM
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IP: F678 AD90
no you were sitting here online for over an hour and a half you fuckin idiot
right in this forum by the way terrible verse, hurry up with those votes |
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11-21-03, 06:22 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Dogg he had no punches....lol but whateva he didnt have no personals eitha...lol
Uppin 4 votes..................... |
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11-21-03, 06:28 PM
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IP: F678 AD90
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LMAO!!!!! funny..
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11-21-03, 06:36 PM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
terrible? nigga it only took 6 mins...why ya talkin nigga show a punch or a personal...yea thats what i thought......nigga i juss got home at 5:55 so how was i on fo an hour and a half but anyways quit ya freepostin fo u get introuble...
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11-21-03, 07:00 PM
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IP: 6521 D40E
yo..tribz took this, no question in the world....y'all tied on structure...no really good personals...tibz ate u hannibal........how ironic...your flow was ok, but u had no content, and crappy disses
vote- tribz
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Worthy of awe and praise Respect "..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
<center>HemiSphere The Write Side Of Your Mind</center> <imgsrc=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/attachmentid=8588&stc=1>
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11-21-03, 07:02 PM
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IP: 6521 D40E
the line staht clinched it for tribz for the ending triple metaphor.....for thsoe who don tget it
This kids "FUCKED UP" cuz he "LIKES FRIED BRAIN" (triple meaning if you can decypher)- it means fucked up(shitty fucked up) cuz he lieks fried brain(hannibal lector ate a dude's brain in the movie, and if someone were fucked in his mouth up to his head, fucked up cause he liek brain...good line, hannibal didnt have any nearly as good)
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Worthy of awe and praise Respect "..Very nice..Very emotional...real Deep piece..I really enjoyed reading this..there are few good writers on this site..and I think they are good cause simply they write some good shit..but..rarely I enjoy reading a piece..but..this was fantastic..peace.."
<center>HemiSphere The Write Side Of Your Mind</center> <imgsrc=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/attachmentid=8588&stc=1>
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