MeNTiLL MusiC

It's the top track ... Sum shit I juss did today ... Personally I think it came out better than all of my other shits on that page ... But let me know wat U think ... Feedback is appreciated ... Peace

listenin.......production kinda choppy.......nice flow and voice........rhyme structures nice.......decent lyrics.......lol....I jus despise that beat though.......killin me......nice shit.......all the stitches in the world,lol......nice ending

Quality is shit... feelin this beat tho..

Rhyme scheme is good... Lyrics are alrite... Flow is choppy good but needs work... Sounds like ya tryin to squeeze to many syllables in a bar an its hurtin it... Try memorising it before you spit it... Voice is pretty good... at some points kinda sounded a bit like Pun... Keep spititn...

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Word ... Thanks for the replies ya'll ... Uppin' for some more ... Peace

the words is straight... but they would be better if you had better quality. im really not feelin the parts where you tried to speed up ya flow, that part sucks, but where you stayed at a normal pase wuz hot. and your doubles is off, so it sound like you studdering. but besides that just get that voice quality normal and work on keeping ya rhymes in sync with the bars of the beat