5 bars
blind spit
due 25 min
after check in
honest votes




this is my checkin

yo u forgot to check in


here is my verse:


Now bitch i'ma show you how i'm way strong/
hit every verse and line make you feel realy dumb/

Your like a Wide receiver...ball is in your zone but you fumble/
Every time the mic is your hand you manege to drop and mumble/

While your up on stage singing hittin high notes lookin funny/
I'll be herre spillin countin money rubbin playin your hunny/

Hit you with every line you hear... you and begin to crumble/
your shit dawg speak up your dissin urself your trippin and jus stumbl(ed)/

nahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhh

im on this

hah bitch mad faggit im gonna BUST-A... cap in RHYMES, u rap shit i flushed ya... dont gotta do much else my lead bars crushed ya//

u suposed to battle me sorry about the wait.... but i had to decide ya fate... rushin to collide wid hate... pure evil an im gonna devide ure face//

im the reel deal... but this aint a movie, so stop sppitin what u heard on TV spit wat u see or feel... dont bite me or steal... my flows appitisin like a macdonalds MEAL deal//

u wann close this quik so woud i in your shoes... rhymes u must be tryin to loose... this bitch is on top of the rap game only wen u fly in your snooze(sleep)//

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................

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i think QT came a bit harder in this lol she actually came alot harder lol but it was a good battle lol
flow=qt
structure=qt
vocab=qt
punches=qt
overal=qt

rhymes your opener didnt even rhyme man u need to work on punches too but otherwise ya did good!!!!!!!!!

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HOLSTER

hey ya'll this battle is shit but vote anyways
for real i thought QT wasn't goin to show so i jus through out anything



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yo ne of u want a quick 6 line battle now?....cmon i need 2 battle............................................ ...................pz

nice battle qt, but how can u call urself a mc wit a name like "qt"

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Wins
Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)

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METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - neither
STRUCTURE - Rhymes
CREATIVITY - QT
PERSONALS - neither
OPENING - QT
CLOSING - QT
MULTIES - QT
FLOW - Rhymes

OVERALL - QT (4-2)

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