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Old 11-19-03, 07:05 PM   #1
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[B]Camarac, Word P. 13 D

Nothing Can Turn Out Tobe
Everything Even Fill The Empty
Say What You Do, Do What You Say
Pray Today, For Tomorrow Could Delay

Incredible How The Glass Is Motionless Yet So Easy To Shatter
Unexceptable The Amount Of Mass Situations That Don't Matter
Do You Tolerate The Visable Or Only Believe Untruthful Words
That Could Leave You Miserable Slice You With Verbal Swords
Powerful Creatures Killin Lives, Createn Actions That Are Dispized
Prayers And Wishes Paralized No Longer Loved Or Mesmerized
Boundries In Life Are Hazerdous As The Taste Of Polluted H-2-O
Createn Acid Rain As Thus Disapearing The Atmisphere Tomorrow
Chrostaphobic I'm In'a life Sin, Searching For A Meaning To Begin
No Chance To Win Do You Hear Me Screaming From The Demond
Every Aspect I Dun Love Promoted To A Love That Was Lost
How Can I Move This Thug When I'm Stuck On Pause
Rule The Heavonly angle Restricted Though I Have No Believers
How Thoughtful, I've Been Chewed Like Trees From Beavers
People Who Understand Do Right No Promises For Breath
Married To A Hard Life These Obsticles Make Me Feel Wet
Drownding In'a Chance Is worthy Loan It Some Respect
Life's A Gun Story, Be Thankful God Hasn't Capped You Yet

HOOk*

I've Had My Ups & Downs As Many Times As'a Functional Elavator
I'm Realistic A Simple Clown Pulled From Lifes Journy Escalator
Life Pulled Through Like A Gage Amazed By hate Devilish Elimator
Forcing inacent Kids To Suicide Remote to Blood On The Carpet
Following in The Trail Guide To Death Cause Of'a Torror Started
On There Provided Birth A Sence Revealing ToBe Disparted
Raised To Believe If You don't Make It You Aint Apreciated
Caught In'a Dream Where Hell Is Blocked & Peace Isn't Gated
The Rule Was Never Leathal I Had Conflicts Certain Yeilds
But I Aint Like Most People I Dominate On Certian Feilds
It Enhances The Flower Adapts To Life Eats Rays Then Blooms
I Free Lance To The Power Serving 0 For 2 Creatin Typhoons
Im'a Natural Disaster Sentancing Envy To A State Of Hex
Think Of The Matter Your Actions Like Unprotected Sex
It Aint a Criminal Affence For Reaching Your Full Potential
Jump The Higher Fence Posably More Radiant For Profesional
Tomorrow Isn't Promised So Don't Complain like'a Coward
Leave People Outstondished Feel Like you Wren't Over Powered
Critisize My Results Ripping Layers Of Tissue From My Ego
Fertilize My Palse Mistaken My Thoughtly Cantagious Flow
Don't Think Teens Don't Have A Risk Why You Bein Sarcastic
Blood Leakin Out The Mortal Wriste, FUCK IT, Prepare The Casket
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Old 11-20-03, 07:17 AM   #2
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uppen....this is being slept on like crazy.....c'mon...
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Old 11-20-03, 07:49 AM   #3
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"Boundries In Life Are Hazerdous As The Taste Of Polluted H-2-O
Createn Acid Rain As Thus Disapearing The Atmisphere Tomorrow"

this line is very thoughtful an creates a siniter effect, My mind instantly illustrates a image of poverty, coruption, struggle an hope... this line alone made this peice what it is ...

"I've Had My Ups & Downs As Many Times As'a Functional Elavator
I'm Realistic A Simple Clown Pulled From Lifes Journy Escalator"

Strong opening to the second verse an I like the very relivent hook..

good lookin' uppin' for feed back on my suffering from nostalgia track which can relate to dis... overall 9/10
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Old 11-20-03, 07:51 AM   #4
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Old 11-20-03, 03:56 PM   #5
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thanks uppen....
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Old 11-20-03, 08:44 PM   #6
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uppen dun sleep stay up b-e-z
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Old 11-21-03, 07:58 AM   #7
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stop sleepin...feedbac would be apreciated thanks pz
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Old 11-21-03, 05:07 PM   #8
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hit this up....
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Old 11-22-03, 01:11 AM   #9
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damn i've uppen this like 5 times and nothing..i give feed...cc''mmoon
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Old 11-22-03, 01:51 AM   #10
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This was a hot piece i gotta give it to you, you had vocab and some dope flow in this piece keep it coming mang 1..

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Powerful Creatures Killin Lives, Createn Actions That Are Dispized
Prayers And Wishes Paralized No Longer Loved Or Mesmerized
Boundries In Life Are Hazerdous As The Taste Of Polluted H-2-O
Createn Acid Rain As Thus Disapearing The Atmisphere Tomorrow
Chrostaphobic I'm In'a life Sin, Searching For A Meaning To Begin
No Chance To Win Do You Hear Me Screaming From The Demond
Every Aspect I Dun Love Promoted To A Love That Was Lost
How Can I Move This Thug When I'm Stuck On Pause
Rule The Heavonly angle Restricted Though I Have No Believers
How Thoughtful, I've Been Chewed Like Trees From Beavers

Nice..
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Old 11-22-03, 05:02 PM   #11
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uppen this i've had 2 people reply...damn
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Old 11-25-03, 05:13 PM   #12
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wow...nothing at all...lookin for some feedback...c'mon now
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Old 11-25-03, 05:52 PM   #13
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i liked it but i tend to like all your shit you got a gift to capture attention for your skillz
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Old 11-25-03, 07:26 PM   #14
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thanks man...pz
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