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Old 11-24-03, 08:51 PM   #1
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just start

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Wipe the sweat off from my head picking my gun up from under the bed/
Alerting in the dark a punk or maybe a snitch and your dead/
Some say i'm scared i say i'm scared of what i might do to yah/
I put the gun up in your mouth you swallow the bullet down through yah/
Deep in the sky its a place i can't wait to see it/
Put my name on my money now everybody want'a do it/
Change the whole stats invisible cars ain't on the map/
disrespect me know i'm strap lethal weapons put a whole in your back/
Gotta get paid you know i live for every moment of it/
And if i'm absent of the green i can feel my hunger/
Know need to stumble stand tall on my feet/
Driving 50 mph getting head from a bitch in the passenger seat/
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Old 11-24-03, 09:14 PM   #2
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this wasd good but you need 3 people who you looked and critiqued...or put positive feedback towards...but good read you need to elavate in some catagories...peep myn...a million miles thanks pz
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