fgee, Mp..., and...the 13th ap....

Your My Best Friend..I Love You Eternally
How Do I Comprehend..The Emotion Properly
Your Miles Away..But I Dream About You
I Want You rach-ay..What Am I Suppose To do

Verse 1
From the first moment - First chat on the phone
My heart you owned it - Cured my broken home
Evaperated disbeliefs - Garded my obscene pride
Graduated my beliefs - Still I have feelings inside
You yet to igknowlage - I feel love to a lost power
Help my loves knowlage - My feelings always coward
This rain it storms - Frustrating the distance between
Love in all forms - Humilatian how my love is obscene
How do i tell you my priorties - your just a friend
Helping you is my life majority- but I yeild and pretend
My uncrowned Queen rach - The beauty of a bride
Deep down I feel Rapped - Can I tell you why?
Your smile Your laugh - Your everything I crave
My secret love stash - I'll lvoe you until the grave
This is my diseased secret - Why do I even pretend
Your miles away but hear it - I wonna be more then friends
you have one arm - But your still worthy of me
My lucky charm - The reason i'm so wild and free
Eternal Cancer of love - never to be have a cure
Do you wonna thug? - wit a love naturally pure
Amune to apt to the miles - for you i'd try to conquore
Still hidden love under smiles -
I'm a criminal for wanting her to say..."i do' your awner


a different apraoch....critiques wud be apreciated thanks pz

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