aight u drop...ill be waiting...under 20 lines

Some one call the doc for this industry hip-hop failure
Stepping to me, like hes got a shot, when already its over
Ill leave you with a pop in the lungs, making it impossible to breath
Shit, I hit you with no guns, n all I did was roll up one sleeve
You might as well leave, while you can, before its too late
If I catch you again, Ill take away ya hand, making it difficult to masturbate
B-lo buffalo, thats your primate status, Sublime-D
please dont rape us!
You probably have HIV, which you know can be very contagious
If you even came close to me, I would leave you limbless n hopeless
Im like a newborn baby, while your still in the process of the foetus
You cant defeat us goes your nerve system panicking for help
Especially when Im packing a line, with more aggression than a heavyweight belt
Leaving you with an expression, like you just seen a ghost

Nigga believe, you have just been, lyrically toast!
So heres a toast, to my on-slaught battering
Leaving you shook and rattling, while my lines keep on battling
Ripping you from limb to limb, like a lioness snacking
How many of you think hes won? N who are you backing?

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Proclaimed to the name 'IgnoRance'
from illness 'DeliVerence'

aight u slow an im a busy man...
"God blessed my hand so i could write, god gave me a stand n threw me a mic//
got it a lil mixed up,
thas why u still a yougn buck//
set ignorance truly, indolence, surely, for starters, the devil touched your hand, and u already had the mic
casue you beatin your penis like a broken pipe//(mic=dick)
i don't ntohin abotu u but what i seen
all i see is a big dot of green// (yougn as hell, no exp, 0 an 4)
i don't waste a punch, i always hit ya spleen
eatin mcs like lunch, with a knife an fork, then lick the plate clean//
supified for response, ive left you dumb( stupid and unable to speak)
you a stupid bastard, gettin god-sonned by your pastor//(fatherless, so he wit his god father, who his mother ahd sex wit)
ur whore mother substituted father for love thy brother
1..2..3 an 3..2..1 u been counted down and your time is up
this aint poker, there's no foldin, sooner or later you'll have to show the cards you're holdin, u onyl got shit to spit so what do u do...wonder in your mind what would Jred say..Sunliem its ok u 8 (ty sixed) him u had subway yesterday(jared, subway commercial)

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

Soz, man, i had a lilo writers block.. N i was checking out otha battles, and my comp jus fuckin lags.. Fuckin swear some Iraqis made this shit, haha. Holla

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Proclaimed to the name 'IgnoRance'
from illness 'DeliVerence'

this was a really pooor battle by both but my break down

HOW CAN YOU PUNCH HIM WITH A LINE SAYIN HE"S O-4 when YOUR 0-5 MAN GET REAL anyways

Open-SUb
flow-Sub
punches-SET
personals-SET
close-Sub

Vote ============SUB

both plz return tha favor with out a hate vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93395

Haha, his flow was better than mine? dude, have you actually tried reading it...? Never mind.. Upiin(1) Tanxs for the "HONEST" vote .. Peace

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Proclaimed to the name 'IgnoRance'
from illness 'DeliVerence'

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

by the way, thanks for the vote liner, lets get the honesty flowingg.......................................... .................................................. .........................

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

haha...the first 2 homies i merked are battlin......

im not even gonna drop a vote.............................................. .......

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envy, shut the fuck up....so u a batller, fuck eva, im a poet, and an open mic writer, i can't battle.....i jsu get my wins where i can.....les see ur open mic catalog, compare, then talk shit

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<center>HemiSphere
The Write Side Of Your Mind</center>

go ahead and look at it...i got some good shit there.....

and i garentee you the next piece i post will be hot....

now im gonna stop freepostin and u should too

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Open- tie
Metas - set
Creavitity - set
Personals - set
Flow - set
Finish - none
Abuse - set

vote = set , sublime sum of ya lines had potential...but most were completely wack. sorry

RETURN HONEST VOTES:

LMFAO (I get my win were i can NIGGA you 0-5 WHAT WINS YOU TALKIN ABOUT
HERB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!llolLOLOLOLOLOLOLO LOLOL

Haha, i'm just taking in what i can. And ya'll gotta stop freepostin', lol. Keep it cumin with the votes.. Uppin...

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Proclaimed to the name 'IgnoRance'
from illness 'DeliVerence'

Open- tie
punches: set
Metas - set
Creavitity - set
Personals - set
Flow - set
Finish - sub
Abuse - set
enjoyment: set
vote: set

neat battle!

peace