aiight
you want no time limit,
but i gotta say sum basic rules

unlimited lines
8 lines minimum
house rules- no crew, d/r, b/r votes etc etc.


check in before you spit, so i know you will show up and i will start keyin my shit.

Yo!!!! G Watchya Mean By Eight Line's???

I Dnt Get Da Net Tlk... N shyt,..

U Get.. Me

Juz Holla Back Then Da Real Shyt'll Start... Yeh

aiight 8 lines,

make the lines as long or a short as you want.
but make sure they contain punches, cos its different to audio,
^^^2 lines^^^

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First double a u z stop tryin 2 act ghetto cuz its not workin fo ya. 2nd lines is like

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^ 3 lines ya feel me ? ight peace gl with this yall

bitin a lil bit of my name, is your only claim to fame,
you wanna make it, but you would shame the game,

couldnt know love, if ghe was hit by the arrow of cupid,
you probs mistake, hate for affection, the epitomy of stupid,

and if i came hard in this battle, that would be a waste of lines,
because these herbs, infecting the site, are a sign of the times,

unlimited lines, to the small matter of 8, do you comprehend,
you only got limited lies, after you pride, what is there 2 defend,

im'a give ya a few more lines bring death upon you one more bar,
you livin a masquerade like Clef, another verbal scar,

im leavin now, time for me to nail you coffin, im bout seal you fate,
fututres decided already, yous a goner, my wrath has no escape,

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Yo!!! G
Make Da Shyt Out Of 3 Rounds Yeh..

We Both Respond To Each Others Freestyle...
But Da First One Is One Offf (Warm up)
If U Want...

Holla Back As Soon As U Get To Read Thiz

its up 2 you, but i dont know the rules about a cyptha.......................................... so just drop your shit, and we can have 3 seperate battles.

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Im Known Fo Being A Terrorist/
Bigga Than Al Kida N Tht Loony Shyt/

When I Spit Ma Phenomenal Lyrics/
They Sting Lik Hydraulic Acid
Pass It/

Let Me Continue Wiv Ma Biblic-al Passage/
U Faggat
Im Hazard/

To U British Punks/
Drunken Monks/

U Still At Stone Age/
Time To Change/

From Renaissance To This Existence/
Jus Keep Your Distance/

As I Spit It Out Carefully Listen/
Stop Wishin
Bitchin
/

Time Fo Your Shyt To Be In/
Cuz Times Click In/

uppin for votes.........................drop a honset vote vote and a link.......................and an honest vote will be dropped back in your battle by either one of us................................................

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Oh Ok I liked both verses but here's my breakdown:

punches - double-0 seven
flow - double-0 seven
creativity - doube-U A Zee (al queada and renaissance lines)
personals - double-0 seven (first line)
structure - tie

Overall - double-0 seven

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

uppin for votes...................c'mon peeps............................................. .................... dont sleep

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Punches-seven
Flow-Seven
Structure-Seven
Creativity-Seven
personals-Seven
Metas-Seven(because he had the only one)
Overall-Seven

c'mon peeps 3rd time uppin.................dont sleep y'all............................................. ........

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Breakdown-
punches=007
flow=both..other guy was more audio
sustainment=007
vocab=tie
metas=007
overall=007

if the other guy could differentiate from audio he'd be aight

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94394