15-20 lines
No hate/crew/DR/unexplained/etc votes
Blind spit due 25 minutes after we both check in
G'luck

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checkin in..bring this shit..my first time but i'll give it a try..im a so called rookie now..lets see where i am when this shits ova

lets get straight to the point, you dont know shit about me but i know shit bout you/you an adopted korean cuz yo parents didnt want you/since then you actin white playin hacky sac n shit/now you think you can battle thinkin you black n shit/talkin, you seem hard but in person you a pussy/you can spit all you want but not even yo fists can't hurt me/you the man now thinkin you a heavyweight on this website/but just last year you depressed cryin cuz a girl ruined your life/then you act like an asshole to the females cuz you dont have the balls to bring it to a man/i read shit bout you and josh, seems like you suckin eachothers dicks and holdin hands/talkin bout i dont know what i'd do without you, sounds to me yo sexuality is iffy/get off dat dudes nuts man, keep yo tongue out the jiffy/fried rice ass mutha fucka, you aint as hard as yo asian counterpart gin/and you cant compare to southstar cuz yo record deal is missin/gin lost his fame after 106 and park and southstar lost his son/i take low blows muthafucka, leave yo dick without a bun/face it muthafucka,you cant whoop my ass or busta rhyme/for now on call me russell crow the way i use this beautiful mind/you aint got the skills man, not qualified to wipe my shit/when it comes to my assassins,tag, you're it.

This kid sounds spictacular, He's a border jumper yo
Go paint my house bitch a make yourselfy useful
I'll tear ya apart like a pittbull would do to a rabbit
You went to a gay bar and left with a bad habit (think about it)
Your jus anutha wannabe who thinks that rappin is "cool"
Yeah you rap "sick", sick like a pedefile teachin preschool
Hailin outta Minnesota, man you aint representin nothin
Cause when MN peeps here bout you, they movin ta Wisconsin
My style is too hot, you couldn't handle it with an oven mit
I spit flames when I flow, Like a clogged toilet you spit shit
This kids heterophobic, Man I jus scare him speachless
When ya read this, it's over, new name on my beat list
Faggot you got so many dicks "cummin" in your asshole
That each one has to have an individual pass code
Fuckin newbie You wanna try ta beat this a vet? yeah right
like your asshole after ya dad raped ya your flow aint "tight"

vol was iight..nothin really impressive..you had good disses..ya punches could use some work...be a lil more creative..ya flow
had it forced moments..overall a elementary verse..

tag had some nice disses also..his hit a lil harder..had a couple
good punches..flow was betta..closer was ok..could use a lil creativity also..

overall betta verse...vote tag

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i was feeling TAG more on this, volatility your disses were okay, work ont he structure that paragraph type is horrible and try to flow more use more wrdplay. Tag had better punches, and more clean cut flow. That's why he takes this. Yo TAG my battles are being slept on so go vote on one and poll and i'll come back and poll on this. outzzz

tag hit harder wit disses.....
and structure and flow was nice and tight


other cat went mad personal...but how do we know any of that shit is true anways...plus ur structure was fucked.........its annoying to read lke that


my vote: tag

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ok tag battle people thats accually a challenge...lmfao you took this in every category...again.................................. .....................

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Fucka Breakdown

Tag takes this...V...sort out your structure...itl help

tag took all the cats...battle some vets

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96162

hit that up witta honest vote

Breakdown---
punches-vol
flow-none
structure-tag
metas-vol
enjoyment-vol
vocab-vol...
vote-vol

apart from structure Vol was way better pz

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