I'm tryin to start a dynasty, and when i'm out for good, remember this/ as my first ever forum to add to my hit-list/ cuz i'll hit em up, repeatetly, but don't ditch this/ you might as well kiss this; it's the nicest i'll ever get/ and to my expense...I only want some love/ from the truest niggs, which really means some thugs/ I can do it by myself, yes, but need some hugs/ but not literally, I mean like the dream of Nugs/ you get it? well i don't want you to, don't relate/ and i could, care less if you do or you don't hate/ cuz i'm just startin in this game, but i'm not late/ i'm the beginning of the end, i'm just layin it straight/ and playin it as bait, i'm bitin as i'm enlightin/ tryin to knock down the game, and i won't stop fightin/ i'm not white, or yellow, but you can call me the lightnin/ cuz i'm fast and i'm powerful, and i'm constantly strikin...

man... i just wanted to free a lil bit for my first. And i gotta go. Holla back.

NEEDS WORK BUT NOT THE WOARST IVE SEEN YOU NEED SCHEM AND COMPLEXITY

yeah exactully what he said... ya flow is good... but ya struct is kinda ishy... lyric's are minor... but yo just keep elevatin... on3

You need to reply to three people's Open Mics and then the links/names of the threads and user names in here.

If you need more info check the Rules Thread, it has "Sticky" infront of it, so its hard to miss.

Thanks bud.