3 replies:
MP~PHASIZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95365
levidicus
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95667

Auspicious

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95318

hey yall i was bored i like that song but i dont really feel trick daddy in this joint so i decided to put me in the song n take him out. so i put a lil verse there. 2pac feat. Prez here it goes.

Straight motherfuckin ballin
Part two, still ballin
Westside

[Verse One: 2Pac]

Now ever since a nigga was a seed
Only thing promised to me was the penitentiary, still ballin
Ridin on these niggaz cause they lame
In a six - one Chevy, still heavy in this game, can you feel me?
Blame it on my momma I'm a thug nigga
Up befo' the sun rise, quicker than the drug dealers
Tell me if it's on, nigga then we first to bomb
Bust on these bitch - made niggaz hit 'em up, WESTSIDE
Ain't nobody love me as a broke nigga
Finger on the trigger Lord forgive me if I smoke niggaz
I love my females strapped, no fuckin from the back
I get my currency in stacks, California's where I'm at - right?
Passed by while these niggaz wonder by
I got shot but didn't die, let 'em see who's next to try
Did I cry, hell nah, nigga tear I shed
For all my homies in the pen, many peers dead
Niggaz still ballin

Still ballin, until I die
You can bring your crew motherfucker
I be ballin, they wonder why
(You can bring your crew but we remain true motherfuckers still)

[Prez]

Itz 2pac n Prez in this muthafucka, alcohol n bitches in a table playin' strip poka/
Toss me a tequila wit lime , shit we aint wastin' time, hoes wanna climb on a playa in his prime/
we ridin' round town, n never back down, cuz when we cruise its 2 killas in the loose
Now be careful who u accuse ,see yo body in a casket in the nightly news/ MIAMI
playa have fun wit da bomb
n mix it wit some rum/
n if u see me pout
be quick ta point it out /
be rite back bring a bag wit a quarter ounce/
nigga roll it up ...n then we bounce

[Chorus: 2Pac]

Still ballin, 'til the day I die
You can bring your crew but we remain true motherfuckers
Still ballin, niggaz wonder why
You can bring your crew but we remain true motherfuckers
Still ballin

[Verse Three: 2Pac]

Now everybody wanna see us dead
Two murdered on the front page, shot to death, bullets to the head
Niggaz holla out my name and it's similar to rape
Motherfuckers know I'm comin, so they runnin to they graves, watch
Swoop down with my nigga from the Pound
Cause {Prez} don't give a fuck, where you coward niggaz now, blast
Keep pumpin, ain't worried bout nuttin
Busters thought we was frontin, so reload and keep dumpin

Chorus - 2Pac version


'Til the day I die

Still ballin... motherfuckers still ballin

Straight motherfuckin ballin

good peice...the 1st verse 2pac mentions Cali and in your you mention Miami (florida)..overall you have some good imagry..you need some more creativty.. you had a good structure.i rate this: 8.5/10

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95629

you idiot, this a complete bite of tupac. I know you gave him credit, but damn, you even picked a shitty verse of his.

As for the one verse you didn't take from pac, you need to work on original content. I don't give a flying fuck if you're a west side nigga, if you can't write a story or express an opinion through rap, you got nothing. Try to write about something that means something to you, not just about balling and all that asinine shit. Try to make your bars even, it helps with the flow.
And next time give better replies.
Shit.

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