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11-29-03, 05:13 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Some Brain Shyt
IP: 202C A952
Strait Emontions-
Before the begainning of my end~ i had bout three girlfirends an bestfriend// realized neither one of them was my true end... wit my soul ripped open wit shock an blood~ my teenage years was when i analyzed a real thug// fake bitchs an fake niggas keep my heart rate up~ my phonie homie's broke me out just to get me right back up// i had to start from sractch puttin my life dreams up~ thinkin bout gunz an how to set these niggas up// i wanted to kill'em matter fact i still wanna get'em~ bitchass nigga had my girl while i was locked up in prison// i should have hit'em when he visited me behind the glass wall~ shoulda stabbed'm shoulda shanked'em shoulda broke his damn jaw// but the nigga had me tricked that he was true an faithfull~ made me believe he was my only nigga that was gangsta// i was tricked i was traded like a slave for some papera~i'mma hurt'em if i see'em on the streets i will kill him// got my son calling him father when he isn't~i swear to God when i die my soul will stay an haunt him// because some put that same fate upon me~ i'm scared-of-the-dark when i sleep Demons out to get me// you should never fear but for fear its self~an only the ground suffer when elephants wrestle// i came but i couldn't conquer caught dust in my eyes~i felt but i could touch it was a peach on her thigh// i hate to say it but somtimes i wish i'd die~after my grandmother i wanted to go near that light// Jesus is my weakness thats why i'm still alive~ain't no money in my pockets i barley can survive// hope is the last thing i wish is never lasting~passing on these waves of heat terminate the air i breathe// people say i'm just a kid living is some hectic shyt~16 years grown old don't even gotta car to spin// they say my rhymes is wack* but my spits is sick~ don't wanna go too far or i'll just be on some emotion shyt// I guess this is kinda good i suppose... nothing GREAT.. Knockin some rust off, havn't just keystyled anything in a while Kemyst....Handcuffs...Auspicious.... High Class ...(what i gave feedback to) Sorry Maven no links.. didn't know till the last min when somone told you u had to have them... my bad. on3 |
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11-30-03, 01:33 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 202C A952
Damn... Just Rawly slept on... no love... no feed back... damn
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11-30-03, 06:25 PM | #3 | |||||||
1E
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
thought there was meaning behind this..the flow fell a few times..and the structure was a bit stretched but..other than that...no too bad..could expand on vocab n complexity...but ok...keep elevatin...pZ
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12-01-03, 05:03 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 202C A952
thanx dunny... UPPIN .................................................. .................................................. ....................................
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