This is my first it won't be my last,my entrence is like a god,im shaterin glass,whoopin ass and burnin ya like phosphurous gas.
no one can stop me im a divine divinity,your a fag dressed in leather like Matrix's Trinity. Easly the illist, mildly modest,forget about fondness i don't respect you at all, yo mammas so easy i could sell her at the mall. Standin tall, im the newest most rude of yall,in this battle game i E-Lude you all.

.....if you want critiques you post that in open mic not here..here is where you call out people to battle..read the rule if your confused