yo tell me how u think my track is... give me some feed, so i can work on my game... not good equipment, usin crappy shit...

www.soundclick.com/verbalconflictionproductions

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ok ima listen to hate me now..... i know that beat.... u spittin pretty fast..... lotta vocab in them lyrics, flow is ight, but its like u readin the lines too much, if u give more attention to how u flow it will sound more like a 'complete' thing.... anyway, its ok. Pretty short tho.... keep droppin....
btw peep my track too upin here

the lyrics, are aiight, the flow is aiight.
the beat is sick, you sound aiight on the beat. emotive voice sound nice.
theres a thousand cats that sound like you on the web.

nice drop

aiight

peace

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thanks man.... there is a lot of cats that sound like me though....lol...

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aight u listened to my shit,so im returning the favor....thats how i do...

aight loading...still on 56k..lol

listening to "hate me now"

beat-its ok,not really feeling it,i mean im on a laptop right now,so its not bumpin well..

flow-flow is there,but u need to shorten ur bars,sounded like u was rushin to hit the snare,but ur emotion is there son so thats good,presence is good,ur voice remind me of AZ...for some reason..lol

1 advice,throw away that computer mic,and get a new soundcard,then youll be straight

UNO!

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its not a comp mic... its a gay ass unheard of dynamic mic...lol... n i need to put my old soundcard from my old comp to my new one.... n it'll be better... but thanks for the feed homie....

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