DREAMER VS Diverse

alright so who spits first and how many rounds do we go...hit me back and we'll get this shit poppin

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IT DOESNT MATTER WHO SPITS FIRST JUST SPIT WE GOING ONLY ONE ROUND................... FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

dreamer, the first opponent who tried to battle me//
knocked out of his unconcious state back to reality//
actin like he's hard with all of his 174 posts//
but a 2-9 battle record doesn't really allow you to boast//
i know i'm new to this board but i've seen your battles, absurd//
only way you'd be the shit is if you were an actual terd//
steady gettin stepped on by veteran mc's with practice//
hittin you from all angles usin stealth type rap tactics//
so quit spittin that wack shit..i'll recycle you like plastic//
my verse will leave you like Harrison Ford "Frantic"//
your dreams turn into nightmares when i invade your mind//
i don't need a heart monitor to tell me that you got a case of "flatlines"//
i don't need the poll to know that i swallowed your verse whole//
so go head and try an beat me with lyrics you probably stole//

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DONT YOU KNOW YOU ~COMPETING WITH CHAMPS~, I AINT NUMBER EIGHT BUT I MOVE AT A FASTER RATE, WHEN ~BEATING ON TRAMPS~I FEEL BAD FOR BATTLING THIS DUDE ITS LIKE~CHEATING ON GRAMPS~
FOR A VICTORY I WONT ~GET NO EXPOSURE~IM BOUT TO FUCK THIS PUSSY AND KEEP IT ~WET NO CLOSURE~
IM ~STROKING TO NUT~ I CAME WITH A CONDOM PREPARED SO I AINT SCARED, WHEN ~POKING THIS SLUT~
NOW IM BOUT TO ~CHANGE DIRECTIONS~AND FUC THIS HOE LIKE R.KELLY WITH ~STRANGE PERCEPTIONS~NOW MATTER HOW THE PUSSY LOOKS OR HOW OLD NO EXCEPTIONS
I DONT KNOW ABOUT ~PISSING ON FACE~BUT IM STARTING A NEW TREND DISSING YOU INSTEAD OF ~DISSING ON MACE~HE CALLS HIMSELF DIVERSE SO HE MUST THINK HES ~MISSING A RACE~
BUT IM BOUT TO ~SET HIM STRAIGHT~NEWBIES GET NO RESPECT SO ~LET HIM HATE~MY RHYMES ARE SUMPREME LIKE A WET DREAM YOU ~GET THEM LATE~
IM BOUT TO MAKE WORSE YA THIRST AND BURST YA VERSE, SEND YOU HOME IN A HEARSE CHANGE YA NAME TO SINGLE, CAUSE YOU NOT DIVERSE

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opener:diverse
closer:diverse
punches:diverse
word play:diverse
over all:diverse

battle was ok keep at it you'll get better dreamer ur verse was ok but fix up ur structure

still uppin for more votes...i'll try and vote on some other unfinished battles and shit.......................................

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diverse took this one had some good punches better structure nice word play'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' ''''
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still uppin for some poll votes...as soon as i reach 100 posts i'll vote on a shitload of battles...just help get this one closed...one.

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Right, Diverse took this. Not only better punches but also much more clear and concise which usually adds up to hitting harder. Diverse, good battle. Remember to always stay at your opponents.

Peace

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opener-diverse
punches-dreamer
structure-diverse
personals-diverse
metas-dreamer
creativity-dreamer
closer-dreamer
overall-dreamer
my vote goes to dreamer, nice lines, WACK structure. diverse, your lines are elementry, but not bad for a newbie, keep elevatin.

word...thanks for the advice...i'll definitely keep that in mind for future battles...good lookin out

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yo dreamer, i see you have no crew, check this out, you could use a lil work but i see potential...........................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1813#post951813